Yo you are a GREAT rapper. The beat shows potential, and I'm definetly feeling it. However, I think your rapping talent stands out more. I'm a producer, how about we collaborate? I have a new beat I just uploaded called "HUST:E CITY" check it out i'd be happy to have you on that track. Get back to me at musicmaster2527@yahoo.com
This was brilliantly constructed! I like the beggening the most, as you really built up the track well. This has a good mainstream feel to it while it keeps that hard knock vibe. Good work!!
-Thomas Swanson
This is really nice. I like the mix. Theres not much to critique about, this was very melodic and the transitions were SUPER. Good job!! :) If you don't mind could you check out my song "Keep It Movin"??
I like it. The notes go together BEAUTIFULLY!! Such a refreshing series of chords and notes. Im telling you, this would be CRAZY GOOD if you used some different synths for that melody, just something more real sounding. Ya know? It's catchy. The drum pattern you used is this songs best feature. I could see LMFAO on a track like this, or someone like T-Pain. I like how it ended with that fade out!! That was a nice compliment to the track. I'm imagining it with vocals and man...this is hot!
-Thomas Swanson
Hey Thomas, thank you much bro for that review, extremely appreciated!! I think my drum patterns and how I fit them with each track is usually my strong suite so i'm glad you thought the drum pattern was the songs best feature and i'm glad you like the track as a whole, thanks again!!
I wanna start out by saying this is a fantastic mix!! This is my favorite of yours so far!! (I havent listened to all of them yet) but this is great. NUADA made a great point about changing up the chord progression. Maybe if you cut out the main chords and put in a series of single notes it would open the track up, so that when those main chords do drop, it will raise your hair up. Just a thought, but in all honesty, this track is absoultely A grade. Not much to dislike. Very good work!!
Thanks you Thomas for that review, always appreciated!! I'm glad you like this track as it's one of my favorites and most fun to make! I completely understand about changing up the chord progression...I may go back and experiment with this track but i'm glad you enjoyed this track, "A Grade"...that means alot so thanks for that!!
A truley enjoyable track,
The only thing I would suggest is to fill out that drum pattern more, the snares you used to give it that hip hop feel sounded great, but I think it could really benefit from having it drop in to a series of hats, with a handclap or something.
Overall:
This track obviously took a lot of skill to make, the switch ups you had in here were PHENOMONAL. I like the synths that came in to aid that piano rhodes kinda sound...The intro was solid. 2 words, EAR APPEALING!! Good work!!
-Thomas Swanson
Thomas thanks you much for the review, much appreciated!! I get what you mean about filling out the drum pattern, I went through many different ways on how to go about the instrumentation. That snare used was a combination of a snare & hand clap actually lol...I had the clap by itself but opted for a more defined sound. I'm glad you like the synths & switch ups, something I do in most of my tracks...thanks again!!
Really cool!! It steps into the first verse very nicely. And solid intro!
It really would be opened up with some vocals, I imagine a female singer on it, someone like Rihanna or Vannasa Hudgens
Hey Thomas, thanks for the review man, much appreciated! I love the intro as well, I also imagined a female singer on the chorus and I could totally hear Rhianna on this, so good call on that! Thanks Again!
I like this a lot, really nice snare!!! And cool intro. Plesae check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Really cool!!! Everything went together perfectly and the kick was my favorite feature. Plesae check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
This was well put together!! I enjoyed it. I like the drums, and you incoorporated all of the sounds in really well. Plesae check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Nice, I like the arpeggiated synth, it really works out well. Cool drum pattern. Plesae check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Very nice track :) a lot of cool sounds goin on here...well produced!! I enjoyed it :)
I have a new song out titled "it will be alright" it's a major single for me and I'd love to hear what u think!!
I realy admire the effort u put in this track!! Definetly one of my favs on here....I like the orchastra the most, overall great mix, very Ear appealing :)
I have a new song out called "it will be alright" it's about teen suicide and depression, I'd Like to hear what u think of it!!
None the less good track, I commend ur effort and quality!!
-Thomas Swanson
I really enjoyed this. Nice beat, and good vocals. Cool lyrics. Please check out my song "It Will be Alright" im a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Very cool!!!! I love the synths and that bumble bee sound. Great mix!! Please check out my song "It Will be Alright" im a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
This was awesome!! It reminds me of the "reasonable doubt" album by Jay-Z. This definetly has a good style to it. Please check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Nice track, I like the rap, and great selection of synths!!
Please check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Amazing track. I love the hook, and all of the lyrics. Very clean mix!! Good job!! Please check out my song "It Will Be Alright" i'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
This was a great mix, nice vocals with good effects. Please check out my song "Keep It Movin" I'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
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The only thing I would suggest is to fill out that drum pattern more, the snares you used to give it that hip hop feel sounded great, but I think it could really benefit from having it drop in to a series of hats, with a handclap or something.
Overall:
This track obviously took a lot of skill to make, the switch ups you had in here were PHENOMONAL. I like the synths that came in to aid that piano rhodes kinda sound...The intro was solid. 2 words, EAR APPEALING!! Good work!!
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