This track is great! The inspiration you used comes through the track in a lovely manner, peaceful... Yet, progressive. It was well recorded, the little "not quite so clean" parts of the guitar fit the peaceful laid back style of the song.
Turn off the autotune? Please? The guitar riffs are great! Though they are very quiet in comparison to the drums, which kind of drown them out... The intro guitar section, and first vocal section are great. I like it.
Wanted to kill myself at the introduction of techno in it. I had been loving it up to that point... Also, I agree with Steinaa on the muddy comment. It would be from the guitars I believe, as I once read somewhere, guitars are not bass instruments. You could try reducing the frequencies below around 280 hz i reckon, don't eliminate them entirely, just to clear up the sound. In regards to the song itself, other than the techno, I liked the riffs alot, felt the bass guitar was a bit loud, but it was still a good job.
(Don't take the techno bit personally, I just dislike techno. A lot.)
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*EDIT* Dude, you need to learn to take criticism. Not everyone is going to like your work, and you can learn from it.
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(Don't take the techno bit personally, I just dislike techno. A lot.)
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