this is groovy! the bassline progresses quite well and I like your vocal chopping and slicing, O.o nice filters as well! perc work done pretty well, well done with the synths, excellent work mate! and thanks for the review
thx for the review ... I see most your music seems to be hip/hop which I not so familiar with so I chose something a bit more familiar ... I must say I am truly impressed with this ... the guitar work is simply amazing ... the chord progression is impeccable.
however I notice that at some points for instance ... 3:35 the bass clips and has too much verb on it. other than that its brilliant, pretty solid arrangement and good structure. Excellent work!
I havent been active for a century and I thought I should review something here, so I clicked on the first featured track. I must say I am gald I did ... pretty nice work you have here. The singing I must say is pretty good and you have talent in writing lyrics, something I havent attempted to do so I cannot criticise it, lol ... Now the structure is good, well if you have singing you have to work on getting your patterns to wrap themselves around it well, and you did a good job at that. The bassline is pretty good and the percussion is very good! the synths sound pretty good ... any vsts used? now for the criticising, hmmm ... not much but the first thing that comes to mind is the production. the bass and some of the other mid range elements like some part of the percussion could have been EQ'ed a bit better, there is a little clash, but it isnt very audible ... The loop you used doesnt have a strong kick, which I would've loved to hear in this track ... maybe you didnt want one, but anyway ... also you could have put in some a lead to go with the beautiful vocals, that would have made this one a killer. Also the percussions in the break 2:50 I think sound good, but, there isnt enough variation i the percussion at this stage, but I guess this about as far as you can get using a loop based program like Acid pro, I know people would disagree, but I like fl studio instead because it gives you the option of
Hehe I couldn't dare change programs right now (only because I am finally becoming familiar enough to deal with THIS program). I really really appreciate the critique though, it helps me to know what people like (and what they feel is missing from tracks). Thanks for listening!
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however I notice that at some points for instance ... 3:35 the bass clips and has too much verb on it. other than that its brilliant, pretty solid arrangement and good structure. Excellent work!
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