Aye, that's definitely hard body bro. The beat is hard and lyrics compliment it well. Definitely has good potential and radio worthy. Start working on some video ideas, you will need it!
Hey since I also started out with FL Demos, I just want to encourage you to play with all the plugins and controls to get more out of your instruments. When I started my beats also had a soundtrack-to-a-video-game sound to it. So continue to make strides and you will definitely see (hear) the change when it happens. Check out my profile and listen to how I have progressed, hopefully you can gain some inspiration and confidence in your abilities!
I definitely like the beat, but it seems like the vocals on the chorus are off beat. You seem like you have some good lyrics but your delivery is hit or miss at times. The beat is off the hook tho. Good work tho bro all in all. You do have some good moments in the flow, don't get me wrong.
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