might turn the drums down a bit in beginning or a different loop melodic buildup in intro is really good but dropoff feels bad @ 1:02, some adjustment is needed it's hard to say without being able to fiddle with it. I would just take out the riser. 1:33 onward is good vocals could be cleaned up a little
Second section is strong w/ piano, drums come in nice but not a fan of the last 2 bars of them they take out all the buildup, would just keep first pattern through or maybe drop kicks then
last chorus is fine. taken by surprise by the outro but I like it, might cut halfway though with a clave to end it as it runs a little long. If not I like how the drums end minus the kick echo would really like to hear it end on a strong note
overall good track, mixing is good, good ideas and it feels unique from the original song, think it just needs tightened up in a few spots (transitions mostly) and it would be ready to go.
imagine "now, discombobulate" popping in lol I like it, the actual song is good but i think the transitions between narration and music could use a little more work, a lack of consistent pulse throughout just makes it sounds strange. In the first drop, timing really takes a lot of oomph out of it, I might try cutting mid scream at 1:15, then keeping the tom loop & some bass throughout second narration to keep tempo. The last transition into narration does a good job of smoothing, so something like for the first as well would do wonders. But these are just small issues, the tracks overall theming and sound is good
Commented on Sound Of Salman - Spiderweb Brasko Sama Remix by BraskoSama
might turn the drums down a bit in beginning or a different loop
melodic buildup in intro is really good but dropoff feels bad @ 1:02, some adjustment is needed it's hard to say without being able to fiddle with it. I would just take out the riser. 1:33 onward is good vocals could be cleaned up a little
Second section is strong w/ piano, drums come in nice but not a fan of the last 2 bars of them they take out all the buildup, would just keep first pattern through or maybe drop kicks then
last chorus is fine. taken by surprise by the outro but I like it, might cut halfway though with a clave to end it as it runs a little long. If not I like how the drums end minus the kick echo would really like to hear it end on a strong note
overall good track, mixing is good, good ideas and it feels unique from the original song, think it just needs tightened up in a few spots (transitions mostly) and it would be ready to go.
Commented on TakenAway by subSpace
imagine "now, discombobulate" popping in lol
I like it, the actual song is good but i think the transitions between narration and music could use a little more work, a lack of consistent pulse throughout just makes it sounds strange.
In the first drop, timing really takes a lot of oomph out of it, I might try cutting mid scream at 1:15, then keeping the tom loop & some bass throughout second narration to keep tempo. The last transition into narration does a good job of smoothing, so something like for the first as well would do wonders. But these are just small issues, the tracks overall theming and sound is good