That vocal is insanely good. I'm gonna have to agree with Skwish Fish about maybe adding a little melody with the keys in the 2nd verse just to keep things interesting. Also, if you're gonna have the drums then I think you should commit to them. They sound like an after-thought as is. Like you weren't sure if you wanted to add them or not.
Otherwise I really like your song. Could definitely hear that on the radio.
Zee
I like where you were going with this. It just seems a bit off for me. I dunno what exactly it is, but every now and then it throws me off. I still like it a lot though. Maybe I can't explain it properly,but Id love to hear it when its fixed. Maybe its a timing issue? I dunno
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Otherwise I really like your song. Could definitely hear that on the radio.
Zee
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