what an awesome work. in my humble opinion, the mixing/production is great. oompositionally, I appreciate that you let up on the ostinato now and then, that you have varying sections that dovetail through unifying factor - a string line carrying in I think, usually. the strings sound gorgeous, and it's not just the samples, it's your writing I think. the harp too. lots of dynamics, etc. sounds like a traveling scene in a movie, or one of those scenes where there is some kind of activity going on without dialogue and the music can really come to the foreground. trying to think of some constructive criticism - i guess you know a track clips off at the end and then the whole thing clips at the end. look forward to hearing more of your stuff. good luck.
that's a lot of sound and tracks for a first go at ACID. congrats on that. lots of good ideas. your music has a lot of drive. i'd explore mixing up the intensity level though. good luck.
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