At first, I didn't like it. Around the 2 min. mark, I noticed the tempo speed up then it changed. Nice use of your surroundings and nice track. Great job.
I like the combination of of Soul and Rock. I love the lyrics to the track. Very powerful and moving track. Everything was pretty cool, and I enjoyed listening to it. This is going on my fav list. At the very beginning of the track, right before the guitar, it kind of sounded like something you would have heard from a Hip-Hop track... That's pretty cool. I had to listen to this a few more times to figure out the message you were talking about. Congrats you two, keep them coming.
Yes,the track was sent to me from my good friend T and I added the guitar parts.I can't predict the magic Twanna does with my guitar but I love it also...Please give her the credit cause I just plucked the strings!
ps...Twannas arrangement with the intro was all her,I give her all production credit.
Wow, Manasha. This track was just none stop action, I love it. I can kind of make comparisons to a few artist I've heard so far, which is a good thing. I love the club beat and the lyrics were pretty cool as well. Good job. I'm going to download this. Keep them coming, my friend.
I like the song, very cool beat and melody. It kind of has a Rock feel to it with the guitar. It looks like you put a lot of time and attention to detail on this and it paid off. Very nicely done my friend. Keep up the great work.
I like the song David. It has a nice beat and melody. I love the violin, that one caught my attention first. Everything was pretty good on what I've heard. You did a good job mixing different genres together. Very soothing and mellow flow, I think it's perfect for driving or just chillin. Good job, keep up the good work my friend.
Thank you much for the review Bobby, always appreciated!! Glad you like the violins...I've been using a lot of them lately in my songs lol...Thanks again!
I like the track. It has a funky R&B feel to it with the horns. I can hear some pieces of both Old and New School, nice job. Good job with the rapping you guys. Keep up the good work, my friends.
I like the the slow tempo of the track. The piano and the lyrics were great. I love this track, it's very well produced. It's very soothing, just like some of the old R&B songs I listen to. The guitar is cool, it gives the track a little bit of a hit of a slow rock feel and I think it helps improve the track. Great job. Keep it up, my friend.
Don't know why but I think I heard this from somewhere other then on Youtube. Anyways, I like the track you did. The Bass and the Synth stood out the most for me. I think maybe you should increase the volume of the vocals a bit. I had to listen to it a second time, because I missed it. Good Job.
Originally this was uploaded to mixposure so maybe you heard it there. The vocals were louder to begin with, but to be honest every time I heard them I laughed to myself...so I thought I would just tone them down a bit. Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment :)
Elaine
LOL!!! This is just like the song, awesome. I agree with Spivkurl, on replacing the vocals with the synth... nice touch. If you are like me, you heard this song a lot. I didn't need the vocals in your remake, I was singing along. Great job, my friend. Fav for sure and once I get my laptop working again, I'll download.
Hey David, I like this track. I can see multiple artist use this or at least some parts of it, like what MaxJC said for example. I would tell you more... but I kind of just woke, lol. Anyways, the piano and the violin was a good touch from the first track. It has a dark feel like the first track. It kind of has a bit of Hip-hop in there. Great job.
Hey Bobby, thanks for the review, always appreciated! It's good to hear that you could see many different artists on this track as that's the basic appeal I go for with my music. I was actually thinking of One Republic's song "Apologize" when I created this track lol, Thanks Again!
Hey man, that's what I'm talking about. This is way better than your first attempt. I have to agree with Cyber, it could be more leveled. Other than that, good job. Keep it up, my friend.
This is still raw, once you do more Dubstep genres, you should get the hang of it. I don't know a lot about Dubstep, so I can't tell you what you need to fix or any tips, but it was a nice first attempt. Keep working on it.
Good to see you uploading tracks, again. I like the song you made. My favorite part started at 1:17. I had to listen to that part forward a couple more times, because it sounded very familiar. I looked at my phone, and it sounds like Linkin Parks' Papercut. The track has a dark, robotic, Hip-hop feel to it... does that make sense? The beat between 2:47-3:12, seem a bit long to me. Keep up the good work, my friend.
Thanks Bobby for stopping past and throwing a review my way, always appreciated!! I also love @1:17, the synth used then is my favorite in the song. In reference to a certain part that sounded like Linkin Park's "Paper Cut", I have been listening to Linkin Park & Maroon 5 all week so maybe some of their influences came off in this track lol! I get what you mean when you say "Dark, Robotic, Hip-hop feel" and I actually had the beat between 2:47-3:12 shorter but when I played it back, I felt the verse wasn't long enough. Thanks again for the review/critique!
I'm surprised there's not more people listened. Anyways, nice fast pace track. It feels like I'm in Africa. Everything was spot on... in my opinion. I enjoyed, listening to the track you made. Keep up the good work, my friend.
I love the song. It has parts from different genres. I can name a few of them, but I will probably be missing some. This has a rave and dance club feel to i, which is pretty cool. I can think of a couple of games and movies that this would be perfect for. 2 thumbs up, great job.
Thanx Bobby. I had a blast with my daughter creating this. I never thought of the "game" aspect...humm:-) With "new ears", I can see how you can hear that.
I love the song. It has parts from different genres. I can name a few of them, but I will probably be missing some. This has a rave and dance club feel to i, which is pretty cool. I can think of a couple of games and movies that this would be perfect for. 2 thumbs up, great job.
The track is hot!!! I was singing this since the beginning, it has that catchiness and with the beat made it that much more catchy. If you want my opinion, this is radio ready... of course you need a cleaner version for the radio. Anyways, great job on the track. This is so, going on my fav and since I know I'm going to want to listen to this... I'm going to download this as well.
Man, this track is crazy. I love everything about this. You have a great voice and I love the sax. It has a melody that everyone could dance and sing to as well. Very cool sax. Great job on the track my friend. Keep up the great work.
I don't know why I didn't review this the first time. I like the melody and the flow of the track. Nicely done. I started to sing to this, just for fun. You did a good job. Keep it up, my friend.
Thanks Bobby for the review, always appreciated!! I'm glad you like the track, i'm glad you liked it enough that it got you to sing a little lol! This has to be my absolute favorite track (at least until I finish the two tracks i'm working on now lol) A lot of work went into this one so thanks again bro!
First off, I love your voice. I like the track, it's kind of soothing and calm. I think this can be placed in R&B as well. It's easy to get lost while listening to the track. Great job. Keep it up, my friend.
thank you so much for the compliment. and thanks to Ashwin for trusting me with this track. It's a song written years ago. And thank goodness that the right music came in. Thank you so much for dropping by over here, Bobby. :)
I didn't know you uploaded tracks, I would have listen to them sooner. I don't know the whole concept of Spoken Word but I like it. I like your voice and the melody. It's very soothing, and it kind of makes you think. I like it. Keep up the good work, my friend.
Hey Bobby,
I wasn't going to upload anything...but then I had finally finished this track and the video. I'm glad people like it...the poem is very personal to me...as I'm sure you understand...thanks for listening and reviewing.
Elaine
... What happen? I was liking the song so far, then it ended. It sounds pretty good so far, nice melody and vocals. I would love to hear the finished product. Keep on working on this.
Hi Kerry,
When I first listened to your music, I didn't like the tone of your voice. Now, I'm starting to like your voice. Anyways, the track gave me chills with your vocals and the piano. I agree with PBJ, on your voice needs to be a little bit louder. I think you could add a little bit more instruments unto the track, it sounds like it's the piano beat just repeating. I like where your going with this.
Hey Kerry,
I just wanted to drop by and take a look at your track. At the beginning, it kind of sound like "18 and Life" by Skid Row. I love the track. I do have a problem with the track. When the storm FX happened it has a little bit hard to hear what you were saying, so maybe increase the volume of your voice at that part. Good Job!
I love this song since the start. Very amazing piece. I love the melody and the vocals. It has bit of a latin flare going, I can see people dancing to this song. Great job, keep it up. Download for sure. :)
on Acid De La Playa by SerialChiller
on Face It - ft Twanna1 by AllenV
ps...Twannas arrangement with the intro was all her,I give her all production credit.
Thank you for listening and commenting.
Allen
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-David
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on Broken Promises by Twanna1
You too... keep making the world a special place with your music:)
Twanna
on Funk Will Never Die by eshar
Keep it up, my friend.
Elaine
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on Unfold My Love Part II by RoyaleMuzik
Keep it up, my friend.
-David
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on I Am Beast by RoyaleMuzik
Good to see you uploading tracks, again. I like the song you made. My favorite part started at 1:17. I had to listen to that part forward a couple more times, because it sounded very familiar. I looked at my phone, and it sounds like Linkin Parks' Papercut. The track has a dark, robotic, Hip-hop feel to it... does that make sense? The beat between 2:47-3:12, seem a bit long to me. Keep up the good work, my friend.
-David
on Africa in Trance by WaPer
Cheers!
on Feel It by Twanna1
I love the song. It has parts from different genres. I can name a few of them, but I will probably be missing some. This has a rave and dance club feel to i, which is pretty cool. I can think of a couple of games and movies that this would be perfect for. 2 thumbs up, great job.
on Feel It by Twanna1
I love the song. It has parts from different genres. I can name a few of them, but I will probably be missing some. This has a rave and dance club feel to i, which is pretty cool. I can think of a couple of games and movies that this would be perfect for. 2 thumbs up, great job.
on Showgun Vs Thasuspect1 by ShowGunProductions
Keep up the great work, my friend.
on To save this love by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
on Unfold My Love by RoyaleMuzik
-David
on Her (Collab with Ash) by Marj
First off, I love your voice. I like the track, it's kind of soothing and calm. I think this can be placed in R&B as well. It's easy to get lost while listening to the track. Great job. Keep it up, my friend.
on Forever ft alividlife by eshar
I wasn't going to upload anything...but then I had finally finished this track and the video. I'm glad people like it...the poem is very personal to me...as I'm sure you understand...thanks for listening and reviewing.
Elaine
on Stay True INCOMPLETE by Reyer
on DONT TELL ME by kerry
When I first listened to your music, I didn't like the tone of your voice. Now, I'm starting to like your voice. Anyways, the track gave me chills with your vocals and the piano. I agree with PBJ, on your voice needs to be a little bit louder. I think you could add a little bit more instruments unto the track, it sounds like it's the piano beat just repeating. I like where your going with this.
Keep it up, my friend.
on scream at the devil by kerry
I just wanted to drop by and take a look at your track. At the beginning, it kind of sound like "18 and Life" by Skid Row. I love the track. I do have a problem with the track. When the storm FX happened it has a little bit hard to hear what you were saying, so maybe increase the volume of your voice at that part. Good Job!
on Todo Tienen su Final by MaxJC