Very good song, very good vocals!
Maybe it's a matter of taste, but I think these electronic 808 style drum sounds don't really fit to this track, IMO acoustic drum sounds would be much better.
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Hey, this song could be a synth pop hit, I strongly recommend to remove the disharmonic sound parts and give it an more overall structure. Anyway, good work.
Hi there looper friend!
Thanx for the positive and constructive comments on the track that i made.
I too be-leave that this track has great potential but i wouldn't know how where or if about taking it to the next level to mix it down etc.
Have you any recommendations of what to do?
Thanx for the inspiration looper buddy!
Ahhh... what a shame the track suddenly ends. Very well done! Reminds me to the good old freestyle days back in the 80s, Stevie B-style.
Would like to hear the full version.
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to my ears it sounds like ebm with a slight touch of old-school industrial, good old mid-to-end-80ies. I personally would support the hard synth saw bass line with a continuous smooth low-pass filtered bass sound, adapted to its pitch/harmony; this way you get an overall darker sound, of course only if this is wanted.
The refrain part is outstanding, I really really like it. The synth work at this part is great.
While listening the track I can hear the proper vocals like from front242 or similar in my mind, ehehe.
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ahh... and I'm interested in that alternate version.
thanks for the review. the LP filter idea is a really good suggestion, i think i'll give that a try. thanks for the compliments on my programming and arranging. hopefully the vocal version will do justice to your expectations=) i'll let you know when the alternate version is finished.
Haha nice man, thanks for the kind words. It's all the imagination, nothing more, nothing less. If you let it go, it can create some crazy and awesome things.
But it's just a hobby lol
Thanks again,
I'll hit up one of your tunes
Steve
Thanks man! i live on another planet from mainstream...mentally that is lol. experimentation & creativity go hand in hand.
Music is certainly not what it use to be these days. Its sad to admit, but many artists over the "airwaves" have lost sight of that. I'm simply doing my part to keep the craft interesting. Much respect goes out to those that still strive to keep originality alive!
This song has much potential. Your vocals are very good. Sometimes the song sounds a bit disharmonic. And panning... panning is good, but not that much. Would like to hear a tweaked version.
Thank you for your words. Maybe in time make another version. At the moment I'm already working on other songs and I'm a bit lazy to look back. It is true that the voices sound a little out of step in pieces ... in terms of mastering can not do much more. I appreciate your comments. I'll have in mind for the future.
You don't have to be shy with that voice you have.
And even with a bad mic you can achieve good results, just be careful about not getting clippings at recording your voice. And as Gsusfrk already said, using delay or reverb would be fine... depends on the song or the style wanted, just try out. Maybe you have look at: http://sourceforge.net/projects/audacity/
This is not my favourite genre, but i have to say: very well done!
And the two languages give the track a good flavour. These scratched vocals are great.
Thanks, appreciate the review..Yea it was a real blast getting this track done...Overall i would say it was a great collabo by both BuBu and Myself..Glad you liked it..
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Maybe it's a matter of taste, but I think these electronic 808 style drum sounds don't really fit to this track, IMO acoustic drum sounds would be much better.
greetz
on Just now - by angler234
cheers
Thanx for the positive and constructive comments on the track that i made.
I too be-leave that this track has great potential but i wouldn't know how where or if about taking it to the next level to mix it down etc.
Have you any recommendations of what to do?
Thanx for the inspiration looper buddy!
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well done!
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Would like to hear the full version.
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I do have an affinity towards a bit of disharmony and dissonance in songs, though. ;)
on Answers by Pillow
This track is great. It could easily be used in a sci-fi movie: dancing bionic people or androids in a cyberpunk disco :).
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on Project x - Initiative (demo) by hardwareexorcist
The refrain part is outstanding, I really really like it. The synth work at this part is great.
While listening the track I can hear the proper vocals like from front242 or similar in my mind, ehehe.
cheers
ahh... and I'm interested in that alternate version.
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But it's just a hobby lol
Thanks again,
I'll hit up one of your tunes
Steve
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Music is certainly not what it use to be these days. Its sad to admit, but many artists over the "airwaves" have lost sight of that. I'm simply doing my part to keep the craft interesting. Much respect goes out to those that still strive to keep originality alive!
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You don't have to be shy with that voice you have.
And even with a bad mic you can achieve good results, just be careful about not getting clippings at recording your voice. And as Gsusfrk already said, using delay or reverb would be fine... depends on the song or the style wanted, just try out. Maybe you have look at: http://sourceforge.net/projects/audacity/
cheers
Appreciate your help a lot.
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And the two languages give the track a good flavour. These scratched vocals are great.
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