dimestop

Yes thanks that helps will check them out! Cheers for the reply

Thank you very much :)

Thanks Paul, ive always played guitar but i had neglected it for a long while, i guess thats one reason doing these songs is so much fun. Im almost done with the bulk of that project, so ive been working on several collabs the last week or so. Seems like i have like 20 different projects and things going on, but i like it that way. I just love making music, and i love combining my vision with anothers to create greatness. Ah man, im just in my element bro. Thanks for the support my friend

Thank you dimestop appreciate that! I dont have many vocals lol you know any good sites or something for them?

thanks bro

Great Paul, issue gone, better music, thanks for the assist.
The bass is actually 2 different VST instruments; Pulsating bass = Massive VST preset "Contra Bass" and the Reesy bass = Vital VST preset "BS Chord stack 1" by Woolf found on presetshare (presetshare.com/p9200)

Hi Paul, I updated the track, please re-check if better now. I re-checked the original track using multiple audio devices and on some the hi-hat was a bit loud, but my hearing isn't great; the military and factory work aren't exactly good for your ears.
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Changes: The closed hi-hat (808) was phase rotated to reduce clipping, a bit louder than I normally use and floating left right by a ping-pong pan, as mentioned before it hit on every 2nd 1/8 note. I guess it also conflicted with the panned center pulsating bass on every 1/8 note. So I changed it a bit: Removed the 808 closed hi-hat completely and added a different less crisp hi-hat, but only at the start of the song and stop it when the bass starts to pulse on the 1/8 note.
Lately the hi-hat sounds odd to me, like a bit late, but it isn't according the midi, must be the shape of the sound, the high bpm, my ears or my brain :)
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And thanks for the help! I love the feedback and opportunities to improve.
My feedback on tracks is generally sparse. I've received a few negative comments. Besides, I'm still a novice amateur with no training. When I give feedback, it quickly becomes technical, and I have to hold back from coming across as negative.
Thanks again.

Hi Paul, glad you like it besides that single drum hit. I'm glad you mentioned that annoying single drum hit. I appreciate your honesty, but I need your help because it's not clear to me which single drum hit you mean. I have the kick every quarter note and a hi-hat on the even eighth notes, next to that some percussion. Later I added an occasional extra single kick on the hi-hat position to bring extra life/variation into the beat. I suspect that's what's bothering you, but I'd like to be sure. Can you provide me with the time position of the first occurrence of that single drum hit?

Hey Paul! Thanks for your stop and detailed feedback. Much respect to you for your well rounded musical perspective. No matter the genre. Its great this one translated well. Ill be checking up on you in a bit.
Peace,
Mark

I am glad you like it my friend !! Thank you bery much for your so kind comment !! Cheerssssssssssssssssssssssss !!

Thank you so much dimestop. I was starting to think I failed with this one, even after I put quite a bit into it.

Hello Dime, glad you did enjoy the listen. All the best, Cheers

Thank you bro!

Bruv these words are very motivating! Thank you for listening, it makes me keep making music!
Regards, NHA.

Thanks Paul, glad you like it. Must be a brain defect as most of the tracks I create end up somewhere under the EDM umbrella :)

Thanks Paul, i agree with u on this one. It was very fun to work on, and Britt was saying how good it was as i was working on it. I absolutely love collaborating

Thanks! All credit goes to the vocalists. I just added some drums and samples:D

Thanks!

Thank you very much Dimestop appreciate the kind comment! still learning a lot but certainly improving cheers!

Hi dimestop, thanks! I'll check it out too

Thank you very much :)

Thanks Paul - we have really stepped up to the plate with getting all elements sounding synergistic. I released my inner Kate Bush in this one, lol