Nice track! I was thinking it could be nice to end with the intro again, just an idea.
Love the organ and ofcourse the saxes but that goes without saying, the pianosound could be a bit stronger, not especially louder but it could use a bit more body in the chords part.
Hey Slap! I love this song, I did not know you could sing like that, really good!
Everything is great only thing I dont like are the bass and the drums, it sounds so "white" if you know what I mean, the bass part should be played by brasses not by a bassguitar in my opinion, it is a nice part but not for a basguitar, and than some parts not all the time ofcourse. Bas and drums really need a lot more attitude, why dont you try a good bassplayer see what he makes of it, there is a great basplayer on Looperman, Badhuman!
But again very very nice song, great brasses and great vocals, thumbs up.
Paul.
Hi Paul,
I know what you mean by sounding too white lol... If this cd does well and we can fund another I would like your help in the process as I value your opinion and production skills. Again time is not on my side so the bass will have to remain the same this time. Just about to move house and this baby needs to go and get pressed next week in time for the Festival in August...
Great version, I love the "guitarlike" lick, very nicely done.
Maybe you could make some more difference in arrangement between the chorus and the verse, that could help the chorus come out more.
But like I said, very nice work!.
Well, you maybe dont know what you're doing but it sure sounds great! You are for sure one of the biggest talents here on Looperman. Great grooves! You should also try a collab with SlabJohnson, a great sax player but he lacks a bit the groove in which you are the master.
It is getting better and better! The saxwork is mindblowing both of you and your son's and I have worked with many saxplayers!
If you ever need a remix of one of your tracks just let me know.
Cheers
Paul
Lets make a deal! You play me some sax parts in the songs that I send you and I will make you some remixes, we all benefit! And it's fun!
I love this track great saxwork! Commends,.... I miss a strong powerful bassguitar it misses the right feel, hope I dont offend you by saying that, but the bass is really important in this kind of music. Also I would love to hear a wah guitar, I can record one for you of you like, that will sure make it funkier.
Hi Paul, I know what your saying about the bass and the wah guitar, I will most probably add both myself time permitting. I value your opinion as I greatly admire your playing and production skills, so I'm pleased you came straight out with your verdict.. Funky wah guitar now added Paul, thanks for the suggestion...
i put it down as acoustic because the backing track i got for this song says it is a acoustic rock backing track am i not right as im no good at genres?
kerry :)
That is totally true, you've pointed out one of my weak points. But it doesn't matter how much I work on it, I always seem to be ahead. That's why I begun to work with guitar players better than myself.
Hi LisMarie, you know I am a fan, but please this autotune is getting anoying and I still miss structure in your songs, If you work on that you're gonna be great!!!
Great vocals! You are very talented! Your recording skils could use some improvement, but well, you know that ofcourse.
Would love to do some tracks with you.
hey paul! haha yeah everyone comes up with a different artist that i sound like with every song! hopefully thats a good thing! haha
Im great buddy! Just got over the flu liek a few days ago so im back on track with the music making! just uploaded a new one if you wanna have a listen!
@Paulkeus - i can get you the vocals. I just need a little time to get them and send them. I've been kind of busy so i don't want you to think i'm ignoring you. I'll get them to you soon
Very nice track! Gonna check out your other stuff, you made me curious.
Realy like the brasses, snare could use a bit more punch I think.
Overall very nice job!
on Tower House by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
Love the organ and ofcourse the saxes but that goes without saying, the pianosound could be a bit stronger, not especially louder but it could use a bit more body in the chords part.
on To save this love by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
Everything is great only thing I dont like are the bass and the drums, it sounds so "white" if you know what I mean, the bass part should be played by brasses not by a bassguitar in my opinion, it is a nice part but not for a basguitar, and than some parts not all the time ofcourse. Bas and drums really need a lot more attitude, why dont you try a good bassplayer see what he makes of it, there is a great basplayer on Looperman, Badhuman!
But again very very nice song, great brasses and great vocals, thumbs up.
Paul.
I know what you mean by sounding too white lol... If this cd does well and we can fund another I would like your help in the process as I value your opinion and production skills. Again time is not on my side so the bass will have to remain the same this time. Just about to move house and this baby needs to go and get pressed next week in time for the Festival in August...
Cheers, Slap...
on I Breathe by CHARLIESANBURG
Maybe you could make some more difference in arrangement between the chorus and the verse, that could help the chorus come out more.
But like I said, very nice work!.
on Akoustic Funk by Badhuman
on A Beautiful Day by Badhuman
on Art Gar Funk EL by Badhuman
Would you like to play some bass on some of my tracks?
Paul.
on Here comes trouble by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
on The Mother of New Funk by SLAPJOHNSON
Good to hear you dont need me anymore for the production.
You are getting better at it all the time.
Big heads up!
Paul
on Hot Pursuit by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
If you ever need a remix of one of your tracks just let me know.
Cheers
Paul
Lets make a deal! You play me some sax parts in the songs that I send you and I will make you some remixes, we all benefit! And it's fun!
Paul
Cheers, Slap...
on Hot Pursuit by Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
I love this track great saxwork! Commends,.... I miss a strong powerful bassguitar it misses the right feel, hope I dont offend you by saying that, but the bass is really important in this kind of music. Also I would love to hear a wah guitar, I can record one for you of you like, that will sure make it funkier.
Cheers, Slap...
on UntitledThusFar(scratch) by Cinas
Whats keeping you?
on BeatingHeart (In Progress) by Cinas
on Cut-Jimmy Eat World Cover by Cinas
Great voice! It would be great if you could make an acapella so we could work with it. Would be great to make something together.
Paul.
on THE RAIN KEEPS FALLING DOWN by kerry
kerry :)
on Maybe Thats Why by elrod
"Maybe that's why" many musician never get anywhere.....
I think its a pitty.
on Breathe (featuring Farisha) by SonicLearnings
Here is mine
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/92660
on Stadens klockor by Kikajon
on I made you wait by LisMarie
on what made me by LisMarie
on UntitledThusFar(scratch) by Cinas
Would love to do some tracks with you.
Paul.
on Believe by tommyb
on stuck in a dream by korner
This is by far my favourite track on Looperman.
I'm a big fan.
Paul.
on Like Im made of glue by ChrisHall
How are things anyway?
Paul.
Im great buddy! Just got over the flu liek a few days ago so im back on track with the music making! just uploaded a new one if you wanna have a listen!
Cheers for the listen and review man!
Chris
on Maybe Thats Why by elrod
I would like to get the vocals of this song, I will make you a very nice version!
Paul.
on CRAZY SITUATION Bilbozo Mista Perez and TLT50 by Bilbozo
Realy like the brasses, snare could use a bit more punch I think.
Overall very nice job!