Alcraine

I love the background you used it gives it a chill out vibe.

I love the pop feel to this track. I can imagine this with lady gaga singing something to it haha overall I think the electronic bass you have going on is what drives the beat forward

Nice beat but its awfully familiar to one i heard on the radio. I think the little bass thing is what it is. I think someones made that before. Idk Its just really familiar for some reason.

Nice track the only thing I would of wished to have seen. Where somple explosive drums

I like the energy to this. I think the bells at certain times in the track over power the track or simply just dont fit in some parts repeatably

Man I really like your flow and emotion? Do you have any wisdom to improve those?

Nice i love the piano and the slow pace. It's a simple slow beat with some flare well done

Hey this is hot. It sorta remind me of those old video game dance machines. I love the synths. Keep doing your thin - valdo

Hey this is hot. I lobe the 1 2 scratch thats my fav part. Nothing I would think of changing. Its easy to flow 2 like all real hip hop. Infact I have like 4 quick lines of the top of my head lol. Good work peace

Hmmm interesting I like the vocals and the guitar but i feel the claps where a little bit forced at times. Peace - Valdo

Hmmm I think this be an interesting Melodie. I didn't hear a solid base line which is necessary in all hip hop tracks. I thinks it would be better if you used different instruments for the music you have and put the one you have now in the back ground. Hope that helps. Peace - Valdo

Hey im Felling this a tip on the vocals. Record them three time on three then different tracks.Pan one all the way to the left and pan all the way to the right. And the last one dead center.Most of the time this helps.For the beat i suggest a good base line. Id love to collab -Valdo

I dont understand the language your speaking but I like your flow :)

Yea i love this for a pop track. It would be sick with a talented female acapella with some male rap. That breakdown was killer keep up the work. - valdo

Nice this reminds me of a commercial rap beat

Nice me I love the beat. I usually dont listen to club type but this is thight.

Nice some parts it reminds me of snoop dogg.

Made me laugh. haha

I like this I dont think you need that much autotune do. Less is more.Keep on making music

Nice track something you can really vibe to.

I like it for being a techno beat. Its fun to listen to and you can dance to it to.