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i like this i ilike the first instrument, then when the marimba-like instrument comes in its cool cos then the drum just sums it up to be awesome!! :)
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i like the use of the various instruments all starting at different points i think it fits together perfectly, and also congratulations on the birth of your child :)

i love thiss, its mellow and really dark and grimey i was expecting abit more than just the backing bass but i dont know maybe if you added a lead it would have ruined it, itss sick :)
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this is sweet fam, i was expecting some sort of linkin park style hip hop beat you know with a distant electric guitar it reminds me of walking through rain when your about to kill someone it niceeee!!! :)
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wow this is soo good, it is like a dream and it makes me happy listening to it, and it reminds me of like a pop song instrumental, its like a katy perry song or something this is really nice, you could get big with this kinda stuff, keep it uppp!!!

i love the glitchy vocals but what i was expecting was when the strings we're coming in, that it would have had more lyrics in the vocal and you could have made them fit it, then maybe keep the first progression and also progress the drums in sync with the first progression:)
Love it
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to say you not made a beat like this in the past i like it, i really like the squealy lead its FIRE. at the end i was expecting it to be a break or something, i would LOVE to see this finished and if not i would love to help you finish it,

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the melody in the intro just after you sung was abit too plain, but i must say for it to be 1 take on your computer mic, the vocals sounded not that bad tbh, but i was waiting for a big drop but it didnt happen that made me slightly dissapointed appart from that this was a good track :)

Damn, bro you sound like you part of 'Cash Money Heroes' its Niceee!

the hook lead sounds HEAVYYYY!!! :] it is too sweet

after you helping me on some tracks i thought i'd come on here and try help you, but i cant be constructive and try help you with anything its just like too perfect ahah btw i have a new track with chords in it, but check description before you listen the problems in description. anyway NICE TRACK. LOVE IT!!!

i quite like the intro, you say your trying to make good music, all you need is someone to give you confidence in doing so, im just going to give you constructive criticism, i liked the intro it had a nice melody to it, but at the drop it sounds all abit too much, with melody, drums and vocals, i wasnt too sure about the vocals, just didnt think they fitted that track, and also at the drop i was expecting a pause then heavy bass kick and some sort of arp melody, it would have been beautiful, anyway that only my opinion lol :) you got a good creative producer-like mindset, Keep At It!!!

i listened to the song on fl, and i think you have made it ALOT better, the gradual build up of the backing Arp, into a Hott Bass Drum Summed it up. i knocked my head to this one, nice track mate :) :)

this is a fairly good track considerin you made it using sytrus you need to get VST's like Massive, nexus and Z3ta+ i think you have potential considering you made a beat near enough using the same instrument 'Depthcore' i think it was. altogether. very nice track :) just work on VST's ;)

i like how the intro progresses with various percussion/drum instruments coming in, something i didnt think that went well was the engine revs for the intro i would have maybe used some sort of woodwind instrument or some sort of ambient but for the actual drop. you need to work on a melody. as much as your willing to help me ill help you, ill post several melody loops on my page that go with your song and just download any if you like them but what tempo is your song? :)
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i love the use of a hot guitar riff and the classic hip hop old skool drum you had going on was sweet. Keep it up Fam. Bless