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servant

grand rapids, United States
Joined : 8th Jul 2010 - 15 years ago
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servant has posted 3 comments on other peoples tracks.

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servant
servant 13th Jul 2010 20:58 - 15 years ago

on He Loves You by Preach2k8
More than a keeper. this track is worthy of divinely inspired lyrics. As is just about if not every track I hear from you.
DON'T EVER STOP!!!

-servant
servant
servant 13th Jul 2010 20:14 - 15 years ago

on Big Strings by Preach2k8
nice track. it could be even better. think of your track as a story. Or a movie. your only gonna wait so long for something to happen. the track must mature and this maturity must be structured in a way that the listener is able to appreciate. For example:a play or movie is made up of three parts-acts 1,2,3,act 1 is the set up it draws you in. It should be so compelling it wont let you go. At the same time it sets before you the dilemma of the main character.act 2 is the conflict. our hero strives against seemingly insurmountable odds. Through this we see his true character rise to the surface. We find ourselves rooting for him and because it is seemingly impossible for him to win we are sad for him.Act 3.he wins. we're elated. its a emotional roller coaster. tracks are different. yet similar. when correctly structured they take the listener on a ride,and are a capable of evoking emotions. one track can evoke pain, joy, cheer, love, sadness- sorry i got carried away, but hope i encouraged you.
i am a writer (you probably guessed) and a poet, not a producer.
I can't do what you are so good at and will be even better.

GOD IS GOOD
-servant
servant
servant 13th Jul 2010 19:22 - 15 years ago

on Loving This Life by Preach2k8
loving this track. I'm gonna write to it.

p.s. i'm from grand rapids. we're homeboys.

-servant,
your gospel poet.
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