You know, you say you aren't that good at composing music but this sounds pretty sick. I like it the way it is, i will fiddle around with it the way it is, make it more upbeat and clubby, but i like it. Listen to the stuff i do, im not trying to up my views or anything, its just to let you see the way i make things. Maybe we could work on some stuff together, i think we could make some damn good stuff.
on Dont Want 2 by shibbyco
http://www.youtube.com/user/NG24Productions?feature=mhum
Like i said, the link is only to give you an idea of what i do, cant stress that more.