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TomaHawk

TomaHawk

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Bournemouth, United Kingdom
Joined : 2nd May 2010 - 15 years ago
TomaHawk comments on tracks

TomaHawk has posted 38 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 26 - 38 of 38
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 29th Nov 2010 20:32 - 14 years ago

on Imagine by MikeAnthony
Arhhhh,' very laid_back, Blunt_sunday's even, chillin wit Ya'chick in_it, Nice clean Production, would suite a Sax_break,& speakin of breaks, *Comercial Adds*, would be well advised? Surley that has to be a compliment, without actualy saying so;) Wink wink.....
MikeAnthony
MikeAnthony replied Unknown
haha thats whats up. Blunt Sundays, I like that..... a sax or some kind of horn would have been great. I actually attempted that but it seems all too cluttered so the horns never made it :( Thanks for the motivation though man. lol its just a huge hobby of mine...not to the commercial point just yet!
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 27th Nov 2010 19:02 - 14 years ago

on Without Love by King2Face
Chick i aint, but i still like the Track , nice groove & lyric's i like the picking guitar, & the leads sounds/git.did you play thoses parts?... you lay down the lyric's with ease,thats what am' talkin about, Big up to Ya**2faces*
King2Face
King2Face replied Unknown
thanks man thanks im glad you liked it not every one like love rap songs but im glad you did and reviewed it thank bro for real
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 27th Nov 2010 16:24 - 14 years ago

on DJ RV-Tex - New Live by rsmisch
Hi Rsmich, greeting :) i can hear some very nice elements to your track, however you seem to be working in only 4 & 8 bars, which are fine for chorus/fills/bridges, but for main verses, you really should go for 16,32,64 bars respectively, your Tune's will make more of an impact,? i hope you find this info usfull. Jamie aka Tomahawk/Mad_Manx:)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 27th Nov 2010 16:18 - 14 years ago

on DJ Gerbesh - Lose controll by Gerbesh
Hi Dj Gerbesh, the vox is nicely synced, wid da kit, but i am sure, if you put some other elements in the track it will surley lift it to a higher level, will it not, ;)
Gerbesh
Gerbesh replied Unknown
Thnx for the comment.
I'm only 3 months with fruityloops and i dont know that mutch..

What kind of element do you mean? (like strings?)

Thnx
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 31st Jul 2010 16:56 - 14 years ago

on rock the disco by roughrider
Fruity loops 9, yeh that sure is a sweet_prog, i like this track , its pretty simple & to the point, i wonder why you have not put attmosphere's or a Drone in your track ,is it because you have not finished it yet? it would make,what is already a good track , far better? Jamie. aka Tomahawk
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 25th Jul 2010 00:35 - 14 years ago

on Broken pad by HMNN
GeezzzZZZZZ this is F**kin Great, Now this is D&B with an ATTITUDE,,,, yep for sure some more FX,,, wud lush it up a Tad, but on its present stance , i just love the Rawness ,,,, Superb HMNN.... :) DL n Fav'd . lol Now get over to Karnage Eye ?
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 25th Jul 2010 00:15 - 14 years ago

on DnB by 520
hahah 520, D&Bass, this is not:) hahah its nice tho in its own little way, its HipHop i believe :) Check Noxius, D&Bass once heard never forgotten , ? ? ? ? ;) Ps why is your WeedPlant Yellow ? lol Ready for smokin,,, yehhhhhhhh :)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 17:24 - 14 years ago

on Hey You by MRJPRODUCTIONS
Hahaha Now this is well good, plenty of different kinds of Vibes, i do like the strings,,, & the climbing cromatic reese,,, does need a Slower intro , but only in my opinion ;) GREAT TUNE no the Less :) .... Tomahawk.....o yeh' guitar well suited:)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 17:17 - 14 years ago

on Pure (clean mix) by Namele55
Hmmm, yeh i am liking the Vibe , plenty in there to draw in the listener,bass is a little shy tho Namele55? & why did you not Master Limit it / Master Comp/Brickwall < !!!!!! > it... it would boost most freqencies, thats what the track needs its all ther HIT it Hard Bro, u will c & hear the Difference ????? ps i love D,cota;)
Namele55
Namele55 replied Unknown
To be honest, compression is something I'm still trying to get the hang of, sometimes I get it & others I dont . . .its all with practice & experimentation, will have a go with it later & see what happens. Most of my tracks are worked around movie dialect snippets so to me listening to em without em makes them seem empty . . .damn copyrights!!! lol. . .thanks for the review dude :)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 16:45 - 14 years ago

on Paper Swords by Namele55
Its not good enough, get it Finished, hahaha kiddin Bro, Tip after the first pad drops out , there a void, untill the Percusion picks it back up ,& you must prep it before the KEY CHANGE, tell your listener that somethings about to change/ dont just rely on drops, its all nice tho bro, but you say it yourself its not Fin, so i pointed out some of the Gaps, ope u dont mind, Its how we learn? ;) Tomahawk.....
Namele55
Namele55 replied Unknown
Yeh man thanks for the review, like I said there were speech samples which I stripped from the movie 12 monkeys which bridged the gaps but need to re-edit to fill again. The way I see it any review is a good thing, constructive or not, its all good, peace bro :)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 16:40 - 14 years ago

on tranceformer by gigionap
Yeh, i remember some of these sounds ! infact i have used some of the elements myself, such a long time ago, still sound nice tho, Psst wee tiny bit more Slash n Spin ?????? ;)
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 16:17 - 14 years ago

on Never Again by Spivkurl
Yeh i like it, its quite Cute,;) its the little portamento riff that draws u in,,, hahah its Trance of course, but just very Gentle Trance/chill, nice tho & really quite a happy little Vibe. So big up to Ya,,,Bruv.........Tomahawk........
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied Unknown
Hey thanks man, I'm really glad you could get into this track! Yeah it's definitely gentle and chill. I'm glad you found it to be a happy vibe! Thanks so much for the review!
TomaHawk
TomaHawk 24th Jul 2010 16:11 - 14 years ago

on Gonzo by jfw
Hmmm some nice Git work ? cromatic use of Glokenspeil, Psst 21st centry scitsoidman ? lol any one who listens to Zappa, must be in the ZONE: right,,, cheer's for your Words on My FART Track,, lol will be Back,,, Pasta la vite :)
jfw
jfw replied Unknown
Thanks for the listen & comments!
Cheers, Jamie.
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