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Elotium

erie,pa, United States
Joined : 9th Apr 2010 - 15 years ago
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Elotium has posted 98 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Elotium
Elotium 3rd Oct 2010 05:20 - 15 years ago

on All of the stars (they shine) by DjBA5
i like this. i've been working with some similar synth sounds recently, yours are great. your beats and melodies sound nice as well. vocals are cool by me. maybe even more gated effects on the vocals. what do you use to do that by the way? let me know when you finish it as well. a great start.
DjBA5
DjBA5 replied Unknown
thanks for taking the time to review feedback is always a necisity for me cus i feel it helps me progress as an artist/producer :) i loved the vocals im not finished yet so ill take your advice an gate them abit more, its actually a stutter effect !! :D
Elotium
Elotium 3rd Oct 2010 05:09 - 15 years ago

on All Lies by SkullMasterMusic
this is sick!don't worry about genre but it did make me want to dance. sounds are awesome and so are the melodies and scratchy effects. everything fits nicely. i'm all about it, please let me know when you finish. or if you want to collab!
SkullMasterMusic
SkullMasterMusic replied Unknown
Hey! Thanks so much for the review =D
Elotium
Elotium 13th Sep 2010 20:36 - 15 years ago

on waiiiiiiii (Dony Dragon) by dragontm
i like the percussion very much and i enjoyed the overall feel of the track which was upbeat.
dragontm
dragontm replied Unknown
thank's voor the review
Elotium
Elotium 12th Sep 2010 02:32 - 15 years ago

on Whos Your Daddy by Jpipes24
it is indeed pretty wild, but pretty rad at the same time. has that remix feel to it... you seem to exploit that type of effect but i believe in a successful way. good work this was a fun track. thanks for posting. i'm faving to have fun another day.
Jpipes24
Jpipes24 replied Unknown
Hey thanks for the comment, glad that you liked it.
Elotium
Elotium 12th Sep 2010 02:26 - 15 years ago

on Vortex by DjHarpy217
your ideas are great and if you are going for a very minimal track then it's still okay, but if you add some more layers and do some longer transitions and master it for a while, you could have a solid track. let me know if you update or want any advice. thanks for sharing.
DjHarpy217
DjHarpy217 replied 25th Jun 2012 - 13 years ago
Thanks for the advice I appreciate your feedback. check out the new song i just did. its called piano symphany. hope you like it.
Elotium
Elotium 12th Sep 2010 02:22 - 15 years ago

on Bradd - Falling With You by DjBradd
once again an incredible track. melodies are good, like the progression and as always synthwork sounds thick and beautiful. thanks for sharing.
Elotium
Elotium 3rd Sep 2010 21:31 - 15 years ago

on Bradd - Berlin to Dubai by DjBradd
this is incredible, thanks for inspiration. this track is deep and has great melodies and mastering. 10/10.
Elotium
Elotium 2nd Sep 2010 19:18 - 15 years ago

on Timer Of Life by DjnErU
i would recommend opening up the release during the opening build. you seem to mod the cutoff but the release should also get longer during the last 20 seconds i would say. you'll probably want to add more background ambience or some other synth, especially if you plan to drop the drums and build again in the middle like you have. also, when you pause at around 4:00 i would suggest stopping all the sound for a split second before it comes back in to make it a bit punchier. hope my suggestions help. i can totally see what your going for and i like your idea, it is a good initial mix. now you just need to fine tune it. let me know when you update.
Elotium
Elotium 2nd Sep 2010 19:15 - 15 years ago

on HeyWatu by renofr
it made me happy too. cool laid back track. vocals are cool and the bubbly synth works well in the context.
renofr
renofr replied Unknown
Thanks for your nice and discerning review.
Elotium
Elotium 1st Sep 2010 04:06 - 15 years ago

on Addiction by tommyb
this is great. i've listened to a few tracks with this acapella and they are all pretty damn good. your's is mastered nicely and I enjoyed how much you worked your tune around the vocal. pecussion is good, tones and melodies work well, mastering is smooth. good work!
Elotium
Elotium 31st Aug 2010 20:39 - 15 years ago

on Addiction - feat Stephanie Kay by JoyfulWAVE
i was going to use this acapella but your song is too good. sounds very professional, great use of the vocals and great mastering as well, all around an awesome track, great production to accompany and bring out the vocal track.
JoyfulWAVE
JoyfulWAVE replied Unknown
THX...for your review :) and nice words...
Elotium
Elotium 31st Aug 2010 19:40 - 15 years ago

on Hypnotized by Dembow
nice progression, good sound choice, fun melodies and good mastering. not much else to say great track keep it up.
Elotium
Elotium 23rd Aug 2010 02:44 - 15 years ago

on Logic Test by DjBradd
sounds great, love that soft but still powerful synth tone. hard to get!... for me anyways. you seem to have it down, your tracks are truly inspiring. you also have MEAN kick drums and percussion. i loved it.
Elotium
Elotium 13th Aug 2010 01:44 - 15 years ago

on Rock On (Take This Down) by DJBoO
awesome, love the analog sound it has and the melodies you chose are good too. reminds me of afx which is great. thanks for uploading.
Elotium
Elotium 9th Aug 2010 01:40 - 15 years ago

on Breakcore 3 by DJTiberus
it was cool but it needs more beats to hold it together, it felt like it went on too long but if you hook it up with fast beats you could make it much longer and make it more interesting. i like what you are trying to do though.
Elotium
Elotium 8th Aug 2010 18:09 - 15 years ago

on Chinook by NiiRU
very peaceful and relaxing, i can picture the warm breeze. i see you play a bunch of instruments... that's awesome, i play guitar keys and drums so between us we have mad skills lol, i wouldn't mind tryin to collaborate on a tune, only problem is i use ableton and i don't see it on your software list. let me know though, we could work strictly with exported audio files perhaps. i would recommend making more tunes like this, maybe with a tiny bit more going on and you will have some great ambient tracks.
NiiRU
NiiRU replied Unknown
Thanks for the review. This piece is a solo piece for my senior composition recital(way to long in the making) so its hard to add more to it without taking away from the performer. I am always willing to write more music, I got more ideas so I'll get working. Collabs would be great, I can work with straight audio files, no problem, or whatever. Thanks for listening.
Elotium
Elotium 8th Aug 2010 18:03 - 15 years ago

on Broughtd by NiiRU
I don't think this track sounds finished but you have a lot of good ideas in here, some of your melodies are really awesome and just need cleaned up a touch.

sorry to be critical i mean no offense... i can hear the polished track just over the fence. keep it up.
NiiRU
NiiRU replied Unknown
This is just the beat for the track. I got an acapella hook and a bunch a rhymes. I kinda wanted that old school sound on this one. The keys might sound a little off sometimes because I shot that out in one take on my keys. No midi sequences.
Elotium
Elotium 8th Aug 2010 18:00 - 15 years ago

on Initial Dedication by NiiRU
some of the pieces seem a bit off time but this song is awesome and reminds me of video games. it makes me want to be side scrolling through epic lands! haha good work i like it.
NiiRU
NiiRU replied Unknown
yes this a bit raw, i did it one take with the drums as a loop. its just keys and the drum loops for now, but it'll get some other stuff. I'm working on lyrics for this one as well.
Here's the hook, raw as well

Ain't no joke
This'll only take seconds
there's some folks
i'm recommendin
go listen
west or east
to those who got the cure
to calm the savage beast
Elotium
Elotium 8th Aug 2010 17:56 - 15 years ago

on Cry Robo by NiiRU
sounds are awesome, they do all the talking and they have a lot to say. this song could fit in all types of videos and games etc. thanks for sharing it, i'm glad i came to your page. this track shows patience and vision.
NiiRU
NiiRU replied Unknown
Theres still a lot of work to be done on this one as well but it is 90% percent there. The panning isn't all there or at the right times in some cases, but I like to listen to it enough I figured it was good enough for my first post. Now I got the bug and I'm uploading everything that I don't hit stop on when it I listen to it.
Elotium
Elotium 7th Aug 2010 23:57 - 15 years ago

on Koyo by U4EA
nice track. great percussion comin in at 1:02, snare sound is great and the kick sounds great in my headphones. love all the instruments and tones. I would say this is def. a house track, and a pretty cool one. seems to be clipping during the section at 3:08 to 3:32, then the cowbellish tone was very sharp. not so sharp later with more layers though.
U4EA
U4EA replied Unknown
Thanks for the review, glad you enojoyed it. Have the 2nd edit up now which hopefully addresses the cliping and triangle tone problems! Cheers. U4EA
Elotium
Elotium 4th Aug 2010 17:18 - 15 years ago

on Warpa - Telling Me by Warpa
nice track, sounds are good mastering is good and the vibes are real chilled out but driving... good work, i enjoyed :)
Elotium
Elotium 3rd Aug 2010 23:12 - 15 years ago

on I Gave You My Own by leau
Some great elements in here. I really like the transition with the vocal stutter. Best part for me was how heavy this track is and the wonderful drive behind it keeps it going strong. Nice percussion and synth. I can see you have a lot of ideas and I totally feel you on that, I have been trying hard myself to tone it down and tone up the power of the sounds... it's not easy haha but I don't feel like this track has too much in it and with a little clean up it will be a great piece.Thanks for sharing.
leau
leau replied Unknown
Thanks Elotium.

So far, this track is raw from my DAW, with no mix. It's a shorter version also.

I'm looking forward to the next parts and mixing all that ;)
Elotium
Elotium 2nd Aug 2010 22:07 - 15 years ago

on Deeper And Deeper by inspire_nung
wish i found this track sooner... FANTASTIC in every way. synth is disgusting, beats are heavy and samples are nasty. your production is brilliant I favorited.
Elotium
Elotium 2nd Aug 2010 18:02 - 15 years ago

on Mindbender by Matteblak
sick track. the bass grooves are awesome and the way it's composed is really awesome. wish the bass areas went longer maybe you could extend them to make transitions into the trancey synth a bit smoother... the drop off is nice though. good track.
Elotium
Elotium 2nd Aug 2010 17:28 - 15 years ago

on witness by VFOUR
sounds great, beat is good, sounds are nice. i don't quite see the lost theme at least not in the melody. nice chilled out track though. keep it up.
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