Youre on the right track, sounds good. I have some suggestions though. When the main riff is goin, there is not much of an atmosphere to the song. Adding some a background atmosphere would be very beneficial to this song. Also, you should pan and equalize the snare more so that it is more prominent. But anyway, good job on the rest of it.
tnx for suggestions. this is only a demo sound. i have more ideas for it but don't have a proper software to make a mix. If you have some software send me and I will make this sound a greater... ;)
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