I meant dull as in all of the components seem to just lay on top of each other. Nothing pops out. Maybe a little stereo separation, or mixing each instrument separately while tweaking the highs, mids, and lows. different things work. I don't think it's bad though. Just advice.
WOW. The vocal mix is Excellent. I don't even know what he is saying, but this mix makes it easy to listen to. And Daft Punk killed the beat. Great Piece of work!
I think that this is a good track. I also think that your selection of instruments and synths with a dull mix are holding it back. I hear where it's going. I like it. It just isn't perfect. Ill be listening. keep it up.
I review as I listen... You should leave a better description also bro. I enjoy knowing a little about the track. And I like this intro. Honestly, The drum pattern is not my preference but it works. Good work. Nice mix. Keep it up.
I feel the emotion from the chords, but I can't hear the vocals. They are drowned out by the music. Could be my ears. Actually, at 1:37 the vocals came in alot clearer, but it is an overall emotional track. I like the voices in the bridge. NICE! I was not expecting the drums to change like that. lol. Still emotional though.
This beat is nice. A very creative, well composed piece. I think the mix on the vocals (first verse) could be a little tighter. The second verse mix is nice. Overall this is different. A good different. Keep it up. PRESSURE!
thanks for the reply...i tried a couple different filters with Evo's verse...it has the grittiness I was looking for, but maybe I could have softened it up a bit?
I like this. Mixed and composed neatly. The synth play is working for me. the only negative was the bass drop. It seems a little too tough for this beat. The bass hit more than the bass line, but overall I do like this. keep it up. -Felix-
Spitting. I do not always hear music with a good mix. Someone has been putting in the work. When the song pulls together like that, you get good music. Not really my style beat but the lyrics and delivery are silly. I like it. Keep the dopeness up.
Beat: Nasty. The hook is nice af. I like it, but whoever is on the verse is not on the same level as the person who did the hook. It just does not mesh well. But The beat and hook are 8/10. The mix could be better but it isn't bad at all. I think you should keep it up.
Thanks. The Verses are kinda meshed in, all of the vocals are actually. I don't have anyone to drop vocals on beats I have, so I find vocals that sound good whit what I have. And if you have any tips for improving the mix lemme now, MIx and Mastering is my weak point for certain.
So I like the 5 second intro, but the instruments hit me too hard. From 30 seconds on through, this actually had me shaking my head also. Master the art of composing, not just making beats and you will hear a difference. Put in the work dmeetrisbykn and you could be greatness. nice hard sound. keep it up
-Felix-
1st, thanks for commenting. I will say that I'm using looperman as a dumping ground for the beats/instrumentals that I'm not posting to my soundcloud. that said, I just did a cursory arrangement of the beat, but I definitely wanted it to hit hard when the beat comes in. I have a track on my soundcloud page that I'd like your opinion on, as far as composing is concerned. - https://soundcloud.com/dmtrsbykn/breaths -
thanks again for checking it out
I CAN DIG IT! You have better delivery than alot of folks rapping today. I rate rapping off of the beat, the mix, how the words were delivered and what you're saying. I would say the mix is lacking a little. This really is nice, but we can all get better. Try to be the best. you're ahead Audiotism.
-Felix-
The guy at 1:15 is spitting something nasty. Truthfully I feel that the quality is there but this is just a little too crazy for me. Still good enough for me to listen through. I like the change-up at 2:30 also. all in all, nice composition. Keep it up.
KiD CuDi-esque. I feel like the mood is atleast. The track is something we dont get enough of in hip-hop today. The only thing I'm not feeling all of the way is your vocals delivery. You just dont sound so comfortable on the mic. But overall decent project. Aim high ArtfulOne! Best regaurds, -Felix-
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I put stuff up on Looperman because I enjoy doing it. Hopefully, you might here my compositions somewhere. Thanks again for your kind words.
By overall mix, I just mean how the instruments wrap around the vocals and how the vocals are leveled. It's not my place to change your mix though. It's just constructive criticism. The mix isn't bad though.
This song is awesome, seriously. The rap part stands out the most to me. I honestly feel like the overall mix could have been better (imo). Nice song though.
Check out http://soundcloud.com/decious And check the first song of lill wayne dubstep remix I made ;). It will be on Looperman.com in 24 hours. maybe you like this better ;). and thanks for ur comment :).
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