TheStoryteller

d~.~b Great track Idk if I show to my stoner of my jazzy friends 10/10 great track

Love the beat on flaw i see is that layered clap is a little too thick reduce or pan or eq that one clap besides that the violin melody goes hard along with the shuttered synth
Good stuff and

Samples tightly worked some Kanye esque production real nice work fam

I like the track very reflective,
but the transition between the chorus and the verse were good but didnt seem as smooth as they could be, but that might be hard to fix cause the strings are sampled
but overall I like the track and the vocal effects

No ur not a rapper or singer sorry bro

beauty real trancy chilled hip hop ish like how u used that one sample in the intro and throughout just a really well produced track

really nice chill beat but u never switched up the paino the most potent sound stand the same the whole song, really good but if u switch it up a little every few bar i think it would be better

lol nice beat sound like a action soundtrack almost

Raw ass production
Classic hood track

:) so relaxing
can i get the beat just to vibe to?

SOund like a lady gaga melody with the synth i wouldn't classify it as Rnb though but still a dope track

your vocal clips a little sometimes bro

I can tell its not done all the way but should sound realyy good when it is has potential

Nice beat but the flow gets off beat sometimes

Hot beat lyric emotional felt but the flow seems a lil forced at times overall 8/10

real raw bro been looking for a good fully done song and i found one

At 1st i thought the track would be lame cause of the title the production was hot the 1st and 2nd wasn't that got 3rd i like the the use of the adlips and like flow was smooth
Much love keep working

Nice real gentle beat, mixing is very good seems like British hip hop to me,

love the alternative feel
lyrics- check
flow- check
beat- check
Nice work i really dnt know what to comment on cause everything is on point

I would put it under hip hop cause of the fundamental hip hop drums Real nice synth work! Like how u actually gave a description about it good beat fam

real smooth i like most of it just not the like 6 bars with that one synth but kudos very well put together like how it keeps switching instruments slow through the track

Everything settles very well sounds like something Wiz Khalifa's producer would make

normally its best works vice versa but you did a prett goody job i like the retro feel though

Nice real smooth on the border of hip hop while staying mainly RnB
Real laid bad

This isn't hip hop sorry but this is clique and you dont have a rapper's voice keep producing though bro