love this.
for me, the mark of an exceptional instrumental will always be if i automatically hear lyrics/the hook without having to think about it. all of your beats do this for me. great drums [as i have come to expect from you] and tight bass melody. that organ is the perfect addition to this banger.
great work!
hey oasis, thank you alot for the well written feedback u bring me here appreciate it alot. I was unsure bout the organ first n almost wanted to remove the whole organ part or compose a new melody anyway Im glad I didnt do it now and see there people like it thxx cheerz from dusthill
ambient crunk?
i love it! you werent afraid to have fun with the synth melody. your percuss accents are skillfully placed and the production value sounds solid. really dig this track. keep 'em comin...
nice work!
i covet your synth work on this ultra deep space track. beautifully haunting melody, made ominious by a tight beat and accents thru out. you thought outside the box for this genre, and i think it paid off...
great job!
our kids are sometimes our greatest inspirado..even havin my son in the room when m workin seems to bring a fresh vibe to my work.
i have a sneaking suspicion your daughter has the same effect...cause this is FIAH!
again, GREAT synth work on this. the intro and drop are beyond dirty. the levers seem much nore on point, as well. that bass drum is hammerin str8 thru my breastplate...as it should. great changeups and accents thru out. i like this one a LOT.
wonderfull job!
my goodness...PA bangin out the hard shyte, huh? lol
this is hot. hard hittin beat with a simple, yet effective synth melody is a recipie for a hit right now. i hear just a touch of distortion in the drums [could be my shytty headphones, but if not, you can just compress them a bit and that should go away]. i really dont have any other critiques on this track...i likey!
really nice work!
wonderful job with the lyrics [your voice has quite a pleasing quality to it, as well]. if youve got more, id love for you to take a few of my naked pieces and see if you can write to them. get at me if youre interested in a collab.
the only critique i have is to watch your sibilance on the 's', 'p' and 't' sounds [easily fixed with some pantyhose stapled over the cut out rim of a big plastic cup or bowl you can hold up between you and the mic...if you wanna stay hood wit it lol]. other than that, this is a hot track.
great work!
really chill ambient-esque dubstep track. i love hearing artist on here who dont mind coloring outside of the genre box. great wobble and and production value.
good work!
this is a naughty lil dubstep ya got here. LOVE the organ accent. your wobbles are filthy. lots of creative changeups and accents thru out. really fun to listen to...cant wait to hear more from you...
great work!
...so airy...
youre right, this is definitely ripe for lyrics. really great use of the piano and flute loop. the deep bass (synth?) break is a great layer to the track. really enjoyed this.
great work!
Thanks alot for the response!! Im still looking for an acapella to throw in there. Lemme know if you know of any good ones that would match the feel of this track.
well, that chorus is going to be stuck in my head for the rest of the week.
this is complete. that critique is, to me, the equivelent of a perfect 10 in gymnastics; its as rare as a unicorn. i have absolutely nothing to say about adding or taking away any elements. this track also has such a timeless vibe to it. i couldve been dancing to this in college or my 4 year old son could easily be dancing to it when he goes to college lol. its the quintisential club track. i loved it.
mad kudos.
skillful use of the pella.
youre showing a great deal of creative development in your changeups/breaks. i love when artitsts arent afraid to play with the many rhymic layers a track has hidden beneath the surface. production valus sounds great, as well.
i agree with Number: i would love the bass to have a bit more "oomph" [me? want the bass heavier? shocker!! lol]. other than that, this is spot on for me.
great work!
its like an audio tour of a bouncyball town...filled with nothing but misfit balls who wreak havok. love this. great asian-inspired melody that is now deeply embedded in my brain.
awesome work!
Thank you! I really wanted to put some asian influence in there as it seemed to have that twangy feeling, but i was a bit worried I wouldnt find anything decent, eventually I managed to find a good flute patch and I just wobbled the Pitch a tiny bit to give it some tremelo. Which really made it feel asian. Thanks for the review :)
totally chill dubstep. great use of the wobbles on this. cool ambient accents thru out. production value sounds boss as well. really nice work.
great job!
::chlapping and grinning::
im very proud of you. you did my piece justice. more importantly, you did your words justice.
...i got some more for you when you want 'em.
;)
i think its sort of shady when people dig a piece enough to download it, but dont leave a review.
this is splendid...but i expect nothing less from you now.
;)
..ok...one of the hardest intros ive heard in quite some time..
its official. you are now my latest source of inspirado among my looperfamily. you are comin' HARD with it..like you got somethin to prove. i love that. your change ups are TERMINAL! so much creativity shown in the mixing/composition of your pieces. it makes them such a delight to listen to. hip hop has become so very predictible lately. its artists like you that will breathe new life into the genre and bring it back stronger than it was before.
i want every single one of the pieces i have heard so far.
mad respect and kudos, sir...just outstanding work!
sublime simplicity.
its your composition skills [layering, especially] that shine thru on this piece. this is how you take a small handful of elements and create something pleasantly complex to listen to.
your drums are sick. love your rolls out of the measure. you didnt go to heavy with the cymbal..just let it be the great accent it can be. your strings are perfectly placed and mastered and you synth work? ...fuggetaboudit!
more...must go hear more...
...umm..."pretty big"?
naw, son..this beat is morbidly OBESE!
wow. i am loving this track on so any different levels. go hard or go home, yeah? any time someone can create something in the porgram that i love and make it sound like it didnt come from the program i love...i gotta give big ups.
[see? look at how your track is makin' me write..bringin out all the thug in me. thats a FEAT! lol]
your production level is supurb on this. and your use of the samples you chose is beyond divine. you let it ride when it needs to and let it break when it wants to.
i am terribly impressed and cannot WAIT to hear more from you.
cheers for the much needed inspirado...and uber kudos on a scortching hot track!
lol you didnt make that up..people have been using that to describe music on here for years and you know it ;)
... but youre certainly showin em how it should be done, arent cha? this is so score worthy...very atmospheric. i covet your drum pattern...its perfection with the otehr elements. i've said it before and i'll say it again: your production value gets better and better with each track. your mixing and mastering of your tracks is on POINT right now. i know this is gonna sound like ive had a stroke or something...but i rather like it without the bassline. dont get me wrong, you know i plotz over yourbasslines and would love to hear what you could do with one on this track, but its so serene the way it is...its mesmorizing.
as always, mad kudos and respect. amazing work!
while this doesnt quite ring dubstep for me[despite the wobble...its just a bit too understated for me and your other percuss elements and synth accents are the real star of this piece], it certainly does ring industrial...dark and gritty, which i always enjoy. the genre is irrelevant when the production value and mastering is this good. youve managed to mesh two very stong songs on their own into something really unique and fun to listen to.
great job!
Thanks oasisduke for your review.I'm ok about genre.Choising a genre is hard work for me.I will change the genre as a industrial.I liked to read , you liked it.
peace
on Look at You (Full Bass Instrumental) by DustHill
for me, the mark of an exceptional instrumental will always be if i automatically hear lyrics/the hook without having to think about it. all of your beats do this for me. great drums [as i have come to expect from you] and tight bass melody. that organ is the perfect addition to this banger.
great work!
on Gaze by DollaDaKing
i love it! you werent afraid to have fun with the synth melody. your percuss accents are skillfully placed and the production value sounds solid. really dig this track. keep 'em comin...
nice work!
on Demo Crunk In Fl Studio 9 By Bebytza_BrT by poterasal
great job!
on return of a master by SUBJECTN9NE
i have a sneaking suspicion your daughter has the same effect...cause this is FIAH!
again, GREAT synth work on this. the intro and drop are beyond dirty. the levers seem much nore on point, as well. that bass drum is hammerin str8 thru my breastplate...as it should. great changeups and accents thru out. i like this one a LOT.
wonderfull job!
on heres a banger by SUBJECTN9NE
this is hot. hard hittin beat with a simple, yet effective synth melody is a recipie for a hit right now. i hear just a touch of distortion in the drums [could be my shytty headphones, but if not, you can just compress them a bit and that should go away]. i really dont have any other critiques on this track...i likey!
really nice work!
on up in this club by criminal94
the only critique i have is to watch your sibilance on the 's', 'p' and 't' sounds [easily fixed with some pantyhose stapled over the cut out rim of a big plastic cup or bowl you can hold up between you and the mic...if you wanna stay hood wit it lol]. other than that, this is a hot track.
great work!
on Dub Off by dubstep4life
good work!
on Celdub - Don`t mind lying by Celdub
great work!
on OPEN AIR by KidKhaos
youre right, this is definitely ripe for lyrics. really great use of the piano and flute loop. the deep bass (synth?) break is a great layer to the track. really enjoyed this.
great work!
Thanks again!!
Kid Khaos
on Only you by Manasha
this is complete. that critique is, to me, the equivelent of a perfect 10 in gymnastics; its as rare as a unicorn. i have absolutely nothing to say about adding or taking away any elements. this track also has such a timeless vibe to it. i couldve been dancing to this in college or my 4 year old son could easily be dancing to it when he goes to college lol. its the quintisential club track. i loved it.
mad kudos.
on Recognition by SuspektNum1
youre showing a great deal of creative development in your changeups/breaks. i love when artitsts arent afraid to play with the many rhymic layers a track has hidden beneath the surface. production valus sounds great, as well.
i agree with Number: i would love the bass to have a bit more "oomph" [me? want the bass heavier? shocker!! lol]. other than that, this is spot on for me.
great work!
on NXT LVL by Factor_one
on Duck Toast by Chud37
awesome work!
on dubstepper trekker by rrinsa
great job!
on futuristic drum line by COOG1BOY
on The Town Remains by TheWritersPoet41
im very proud of you. you did my piece justice. more importantly, you did your words justice.
...i got some more for you when you want 'em.
;)
on The Opening by Sunkizz
this is splendid...but i expect nothing less from you now.
;)
on My old piano by Sunkizz
on Fat Ass by Sunkizz
on Tic toc by Sunkizz
its official. you are now my latest source of inspirado among my looperfamily. you are comin' HARD with it..like you got somethin to prove. i love that. your change ups are TERMINAL! so much creativity shown in the mixing/composition of your pieces. it makes them such a delight to listen to. hip hop has become so very predictible lately. its artists like you that will breathe new life into the genre and bring it back stronger than it was before.
i want every single one of the pieces i have heard so far.
mad respect and kudos, sir...just outstanding work!
on Deep down by Sunkizz
its your composition skills [layering, especially] that shine thru on this piece. this is how you take a small handful of elements and create something pleasantly complex to listen to.
your drums are sick. love your rolls out of the measure. you didnt go to heavy with the cymbal..just let it be the great accent it can be. your strings are perfectly placed and mastered and you synth work? ...fuggetaboudit!
more...must go hear more...
on Hard times by Sunkizz
naw, son..this beat is morbidly OBESE!
wow. i am loving this track on so any different levels. go hard or go home, yeah? any time someone can create something in the porgram that i love and make it sound like it didnt come from the program i love...i gotta give big ups.
[see? look at how your track is makin' me write..bringin out all the thug in me. thats a FEAT! lol]
your production level is supurb on this. and your use of the samples you chose is beyond divine. you let it ride when it needs to and let it break when it wants to.
i am terribly impressed and cannot WAIT to hear more from you.
cheers for the much needed inspirado...and uber kudos on a scortching hot track!
on Restitution [ft. DJ Aerith] by SovereignKonceptz
... but youre certainly showin em how it should be done, arent cha? this is so score worthy...very atmospheric. i covet your drum pattern...its perfection with the otehr elements. i've said it before and i'll say it again: your production value gets better and better with each track. your mixing and mastering of your tracks is on POINT right now. i know this is gonna sound like ive had a stroke or something...but i rather like it without the bassline. dont get me wrong, you know i plotz over yourbasslines and would love to hear what you could do with one on this track, but its so serene the way it is...its mesmorizing.
as always, mad kudos and respect. amazing work!
U'v been a very big motivation
As long as known u.
I really appreciate it.
Ill return the favor =]
on Stop by CSoul
great job!
peace
on Asian Market by AistisIce
i covet your work and talent.