When I listen to the track I envision a beautiful mermaid and feel like I'm underwater. The title fits the song well and even though you didn't label the track trance I would consider it that. It welcomes the imagination.
You should get somebody singing over that because the background is beautiful but adds attention to like a chaotic serenity and as catchy as it is it could be even more dramatic. So if you do add more keep me posted.
on mermaid dream by DanGoldstein
on Black Lipstick by BlancFroid
on Night World by BlancFroid