your growling bass during the intro is sick. percussion is good. drop is kindof weak. need more transitions and pads to fill things out between sections. also your basslines are too distorted/overdriven but they have some potential. keep refining it and it could be really good.
i like your percussion... i agree, some of the wobbles sound really good. others not so much. pretty minimal feel which can be cool. anyways keep producing and im sure everything will click together and make a bangin track.
pretty sick dude. great melodic progressions that match the vocals. i would touch it up in a few places by adding like some reverb on the vocals and i would also probably take down the levels on the high hats that you bring in at points. but overall you hit the nail on the head yo good job.
excellent drums. i love most of the bass sounds. production is tight. nice groove. i would say some of the basslines are not uniform in their keys but overall it doesnt detract much from the tune. it would sound better if everything were in tune though. big ups!
great intro, the drop is pretty sick. i think your wobble levels need to come down or lose some of the overdrive cause they sound a little too crunchy to me. Anway pretty creative toon here. I liked it.
excellent lounge track. i should really try my hand at something like this cause i love what youve done especially those f'ing awesome vocals. an absolute perfect match with your house groove. i agree with poster below... i wanna be at a beach bar in mexico or florida ahaha.
agreed, this has some potential. primary problems are that your vocals are not in time with the tempo of the drums which makes your drop seem awkward and when you use smaller chunks inbetween some of the beats they also sound bad. i dont know what minor2go is talking about. the wobbles are in the correct tempo and line up relatively well with your drums. work on transitions. sometimes you will just drop in a totally new bassline with not a trace of the old one remaining. lastly fix the keys of your basslines because they dont match.
thanks man glad u like it... looking for a vocal to throw in, no luck so far, i'm too picky when it comes to that, always have a difficult time deciding what to use
Interesting stuff. Your echoing synth stabs are really nice. I think your bass synth could be a bit more intersting... its kindof generic atm. it would be nice to have at least a bit of a transition before your bring in your bassline... even a reversed crash would help smooth things out. really like the bongo percussion elements. they add a lot to the track. pretty chill track overall. nicely done
yea its a great first dubstep track. you just need to add some faster wobbles in there and realign some of the wobbles which are a tiny bit misaligned from the beat.
ive heard worse... especially from garageband. your wobbles could be worse as well. decent use of the vocals. my advice, get yourself a real DAW and never look back to garageband. in the mean time keep producing and you will get better.
great use of the subbase, your main bass sound is pretty sick overall. i might like some more syncopation in the wobbles but other than that everything soundin good on my skullkandy :-}
Drums are excellent, nice use of vocals, your wobbles are pretty decent. Your right it could use cleaning up in some places. I would love to hear more of a buildup before you drop the first wobble riff, also i think that first wobble riff needs a subbass. Other than that you've got a damn solid track.
FInally something listenable!!! Most of the EDM tracks on this site are total garbage. But dont take the word "listenable" to lightly. Its a very well crafted track. Lots of good transitions, your EQing is spot on, and it has a nice progression/flow. Well done.
yea what you have is a great start i agree but it sounds like your kick is super distorted (almost sounds like a gabber kick) and prog house kicks should generally be very booming and smooth. also it needs some buildups and another synth part. good luck with completing this!
Ok, alot of potential here. you did a nice job bringing in the drums. the bass drop was a little minimal for me... i usually prefer a bigger buildup than just a reversed cymbal before the bassline drops. Your wobbles are perfectly timed to the beat. You definetly need to get your levels and EQing worked out. The most apparant EQing that it needs is on the bassline (or it may just be too loud im not sure) because its overloading my speakers and obscuring your drums a bit. Also your bassline could use some more variation between 8 bar loops. I think your vocals could be less distorted as well. This has some great potential for a sick track. right now its decent but it could be great!
thanks for ya review mate.....
basicly this tune was jst a tester to see how much my ram on my pc can handle..
my ram at the moment is'nt very big..its less than 1gb so my pc had alot of trouble makin this track.
but thanks for ya comment anyway...and once ive soughted my ram out i will update this track
your obviously new to electronic dance music. EDM should always be structured around the "8 bar loop" or "8 bar phrase". If your dropping in a new instrument or changing the melody or basically changing anything in the track the change has to come at the beginning of the next 8 bar loop. For instance you can't drop in the new kick where you did it has to start at the beginning of the next 8 bar phrase.
yes iam and still learning everyday! like i said this was one of my first so i know i have have a lot to work on, but i try to make music in my own way so its not always the right way! many thanks for the input tho!..Dms.
i can def get jiggy to this... its a dirty piece... your obviously a decent producer so next time just make your own drum loop and dont sell yourself short on that aspect of your track.
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basicly this tune was jst a tester to see how much my ram on my pc can handle..
my ram at the moment is'nt very big..its less than 1gb so my pc had alot of trouble makin this track.
but thanks for ya comment anyway...and once ive soughted my ram out i will update this track
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