Hi Bachuss,
I Like the weird bass a lot. The track has great potential.
My constructive crit' is that the Melodic part would benefit from following the major scale a little closer. The higher pitched notes in particular could visit the major 3rd or 5th rather than where they are. There is enough discord in the the rest of the song to make it quirky & cool. A slightly more simple and melodic melody would give the listener an "anchor" in the storm.
Good work!
Regards
Jingles
on turns by bachuss
I Like the weird bass a lot. The track has great potential.
My constructive crit' is that the Melodic part would benefit from following the major scale a little closer. The higher pitched notes in particular could visit the major 3rd or 5th rather than where they are. There is enough discord in the the rest of the song to make it quirky & cool. A slightly more simple and melodic melody would give the listener an "anchor" in the storm.
Good work!
Regards
Jingles