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You nearly lost my attention in the first eight seconds but I'm glad I hung in, great track.

It's certainly slick. Great production work. perhaps not a genre I follow but its catchy and got all the right elements in the right place sounding fab.

Hi billy, this is brill. I really like the originality. Some nice vocal, gating going on too. excellent stuff.

Sorry dude I was mashed on smokes and beers,
I am analy retentive with genres at times. lol I meant to say I like it anyways. As for my anal retention issue lol, I would put your tunes in Dance genre. It's such a broad spectrum no one(like me)can be fussy ashole.

I have picked a few very cool tunes for you to check out, classics in their fields.

TECHNO - Dustin Zahn-Stranger to stability - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mhN3psz4dI
(note the industrial thumping with sparse drums and no melody 125BPM)

DEEPHOUSE - Oliver Schories - Backpack Of Memories (Original Mix)- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54RpVZL7WHs
(deep drums with layers upon layers of deep sounds and a long evolving melody, and vocals with no meaning. 128BPM)

PROGRESSIVEHOUSE - Humate - Love Stimulation (Tom Middleton Remodel)- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WPVAeczWlKU
(Monster with a dynamic melody and powerful driving bass 128BPM)

TECH HOUSE - You've Got The Love (Mark Knight Remix) - Florence and the Machine. - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6lp3dQ2Jmk4
(punchy with edgy synth sounds, 130-133BPM)

I hope you enjoy them.

Hello darkreine, hope you don't mind me giving constructive criticism? You have great sound quality & ideas so to enhance your music I suggest two things, 1. know your genre. many tracks labelled as deep house miss the point. 2. listen to the great tracks of each genre, pick out the tempo, rhythm, and pump it with as many odd ideas as you like. within their respective genre's. Deephouse is almost exclusively 128bpm - 125BPM, with a long and swelling build up, to a non melodic hypnotic beat. Bongo's are king in Deephouse & Techno. keep IT COMING GREAT things are afoot.

Wow what can I say. Eclectic, interesting, pounding, different. wasn't expecting that. Sounds like you are having fun. On a more valid note, there are sections that if explored to the max would provide you with a commercial individual sound, that would be a hit. I enjoyed it very much and it was full of surprises. It's a pity more members don't comment but they should check this out.

Another stormer Gilbert good luck anjunabeats.

Hey man, this is good, it reminds me of william orbits theme to that movie The Beach. however for me the goodies arrive so late in the tune. I like a good lead in too, but yank all that good stuff from the end to the mid front then break down a chilled central piece before you bring back the goodies again in a crescendo. lol do you know what i mean?

I like your track, it is very catchy. A little thin on the sound production front, it needs beef(thickness). But a nice melody arp that covers the track and a great vocal, is the vocal from Looperman?

other than the sound clash around 3:08+ its very funky and pumping, only LM will kick this off soon. Mashups and all.

If i was reveiwing this like a latest release tune from an established artist I would be harsh, which is sad because its actually very good but the top lead is the reason i wouldn't buy it. it's not in keeping with the track for me, but all the same i love the rest of tune, great intro and overall feel.hope I'm not being pedantic.

I love this track at the beginning its very slick and inviting, I hope you go on to make it burst with energy in a cruscendo of a build up.

My favourite classical peice. lol, don't hold it against me if I wince. But kudos for attempting such a feat. Check out KTA's version he did an outstanding trance version. Anyway keep on enhancing it, the tempo is all wrong for classical tho.

A good tune is a good tune, I like your track, it has great simplicity and movement. effective and danceable, really like the melody. Boost the frequencies a bit, pump it up.

hey myladyfresh, i really quite like this, it reminds me of early Softcell. A bigger production and this would be cool as.

There is a great tune in here. I like 99% of what you have done here, the synths are fine by me and the bass is a little driver pushing it along, so don't change that. But my 1'ish crit is that sound with the flange (deadmau5) style is good but it lost momentum at 4.00 mins. I would have prefered the flange rate to stay 1/16 insted of dropping it down to 1/8 let it down to 1/8 in the end when the main lead has dropped out. oh and 1 last thing there is a slight chord clash once in early part. other than that I love it.

I really like the drums excellent on the rythymn section, i like the meoldy section too, perhaps not all of it. and lack of bass makes it feel slightly hollow. If you did too melody lines one with strings that glide and a seperate synth with one layer split on an oct higher to off set the flat sound to the melody it would move a little more. one last thing a small breakdown is needed. most likely at the section with the most going on. It has great potential needs arrangement.

I like this toddmeister, nice drums and snap on that snare good clear production. Perhaps i would reclassify this into deep house, tempo wise. Im a picky fooker.

lol Badger boots? I knew u had to be Irish or scots when i seen the photo. (not taking the piss). Nice tune by the way. I think the mixing needs a slight adjustment the second lead is slightly overpowering but in all a nice deadmau5 style tune. Checkout my deadmau5 copy versions and one original i did.

Hi again James, thought i'd leave u with some deadmau5 tips if u like to help understand his tunes more.
1. he uses 6 bar loops.
2. The bass is based on the the top line of the melody so that if u use a series of chords for the melody, copy only the top line and move down a few octaves, for the bass line.
3. when using a stabbed or staccato style (chords), he uses 5 0r 6 stabs across 1 bar, with the fith or sixth note out of sequence.
4. long intro's and build ups, breaks are usually melody chords broken up into short sections and repeated. Goodluck on the next project.

Hi dude , you have some excellent sounds going on in here, a few small issues to help u smooth the tune out. at the moment everthing sounds detached from each other. The wobble bass is somehow not enhancing the track, perhaps raise it 1 oct higher, and add some movement in it (vary the notes). secondly u drop in and out of beats without a crescendo too often meaning it never raises the pulse. Deep house needs no vocal however it is big on percussion, which u are lacking here. One last thing in Deephouse less is more. just deeper in tones.

I listened to a number of songs you made, and I can say you are as mad as a hatter, all good tho as they are fabulous in rich textue and cool melodies with crazy arpage, top dollar, a style all your own. Fame is just around the corner.

I like it, quite dark and sinister, with cool notation. altho when it stopped i was hoping it was gonna burst into a main pumping groove but alas..

well it made me smile and I like its craziness. Perhaps a little too much spacializer or reverb post mix like its in my bathroom. But 5 stars for likeability factor.

I was checkin out whats posted that wasn't hip hop (not dissin hip hop its just to plentyful) and what a great track to stumble upon. Top stuff mate.

In a word. . 'Mental'.