Wow, you always bring the good tunes! The vocals are awesome. Is there any advice on how to get your vocals sounding so clean?
I love the guitar delay effect from the beginning. And the drums are sounding so beautiful.
I really like the feeling of this. Its bouncy and dancey but also has a dark synth vibe to it. You picked good sounds.
I think having a bigger build up would really help. In the beginning you have the lead fade in slowly which is good but you can also have your snare fade in and get faster as you near the drop. Or you can add a white noise riser to really create tension.
I hope that helps. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the reply, I was considering making it longer, but I felt I had it about just right honestly. That suggestion in the beginning tho, Imma try it and see how it sounds.
I'll say I have never heard a trip hop song before but this was enthralling. The sounds work so well together but manage to stay eerie and interesting. And the vocals just add a whole other dimension to it.
Well done!
Wow as soon as that bass line comes in, I was hooked. I really love how you made the bass really stand out but still subtle enough as to not let it get in the way of all the other instruments.
Yo!
I've been waiting for you to release a new track. And this did not disappoint, this type of sound is something I have also been trying to achieve myself. You are awesomely talented.
I have been working on a dubstep song myself (my first one so I'm trying my best) and I can only hope it turns out half as good as this.
Hey! This is actually really well done for your first Future Bounce track. But I've got some pointers for you, and keep in mind I'm no professional.
So from the beginning of the track till before the build up around 0:30, the song can use a lot more ambiance and maybe different kind of percussion sounds in the back ground to keep the listeners interested. And the build up could use a lot more risers and sweep ups to create more tensions.
The drop itself could probably use some more work to really hit hard. The main melody is really good but I feel like it was a little weak and could probably be louder and possibly mixed better to help it cut through.
Overall, the song is good but just little things that could really make it stand out from the rest. Keep up the Work!!
Cool! Definitely try something with it. I might add some soft drums/percussion to it and maybe some guitar, so take it in a different direction if you want!
I will agree with the previous comment in that some variation to the drums would be helpful and I would even say some variation in sounds. Maybe have a different synth come in between some parts to keep the listener interested.
But this is a great start, so keep it up!
I am gonna be honest with you, the feeling is there, BUT I feel like you could have done better with the build up.
It is a good start to a banger though, all the elements there.
I feel, for example, 1:00 to 1:30 could have been a much bigger build up either with the snares or the kick or a riser of some sort.
The same thing with around 2:24.
But I love the feeling you are going for, as I am trying to go for the same thing, and keep improving.
Good job!
Thanks a lot for your honest reply. I think you are spot on as the build up before the drop needs some more work to really get the fire at the drop. I will keep on working on it! Thanks again for pointing it out!
I have always wanted to make a synthwave track just like this.
Great job on the arrangement of the track. I would have to agree on working on the mix and also I really feel it was missing something that would have sent it over the top, possibly a different lead or instrument. But overall, really good.
Keep up the work!
Thank you so very much! I would agree with you, it does feel it's missing something but I've not the skill or creativity to figure out what it is at this time, I'm hoping when I improve I can revisit it! Thanks again DsideK!
Hey this is great. I like the vibe and the sounds.
I would say the overall mix could be improved such as the vocals or the bass being a bit louder to really break through the mix.
Keep it up!
Hey man I love the direction you were going with this. I love the intro.
With that being said, I do believe it can get a bit repetitive. Maybe adding a breakdown in the middle with different sounds for variety? Or change up the drums here and there to break up the monotony.
But overall a great start man. Keep it up!
Thank you so much for your comment! This is very useful for me I will try to improve the song But the intro I downloaded from this site in the house music section I agree that this beat is beautiful
Sounds a lot like Alan Walker. I enjoy the melody but I feel like it gets a little repetitive. Maybe changing the melody or a variation of it halfway through the song. Or even adding some vocals.
Anyways keep up the good work.
I really loved the orchestral part of this and the transition into the dubstep was awesome. I will say though that I think there could have been more of a build leading into the dubstep. Possibly more risers or something to build up that suspense leading into the dubstep.
Other than that everything was beautifully written and produced. Great job!
The vocal is great! And the track itself is very well done.
Did you find the vocal here?
I feel like the song itself could have used more stereo. Like the drums could have been panned more to give the song more space.
But still a great song!!!
Thanks! Yeah I got the vocals from here, should be under Youngermusic in the acapella section. Thanks for the advice, I'll try to remember that for future projects!
I love how high energy this is and will definitely get people moving.
However, I feel like the track itself is to wide. The bass and some of the drums could be in mono to give the song a more stable base to work with, the vocals work well with being wide though.
All in all though, a great song. Keep up the good work!
Wow I put this song on and without even knowing it, I started vibing. That's how you know you made a good song. I love the overall feeling and the vocals shine right through the mix. I strive to make something close to this.
This is so soothing. I love the piano work. Also did you want it to be short? I can imagine a full 3 minute song and possibly a vocal over it to really add more flavor to it.
Thank you DsideK. No, I just ran out of ideas after composing first 8 bars :D Yes, I am still looking for some vocalist to collab on this, that would be great. Again thanks a lot!
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on Private places by Danke
I love the guitar delay effect from the beginning. And the drums are sounding so beautiful.
Amazing job as usual.
I saturated the high frequencies at around 150Hz ...
subtracrted the low mids ...
made bright and few reverb ...
but mainly thanx for the loopmaker for the raw :-) base ...
fistbump, Danke
on WooWeeWoo by koga100
I think having a bigger build up would really help. In the beginning you have the lead fade in slowly which is good but you can also have your snare fade in and get faster as you near the drop. Or you can add a white noise riser to really create tension.
I hope that helps. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the input. ^_^
on Show It To Me by ClickbaitCabaret
Well done!
on Day off by Danke
Great job.
on LunnchBoxx - Clouds by LunnchBoxx
I've been waiting for you to release a new track. And this did not disappoint, this type of sound is something I have also been trying to achieve myself. You are awesomely talented.
I have been working on a dubstep song myself (my first one so I'm trying my best) and I can only hope it turns out half as good as this.
Great job!
Glad you like it bud, lemme know if you finish the track so I could hear it.
on Millenium by Danke
Awesome job!
metal is the place where we live :-)
if you look at below, you could listen the nice language of Hungary :-) in metal music ...
fistbump, Danke
on Summer Nights by Jaboy87
So from the beginning of the track till before the build up around 0:30, the song can use a lot more ambiance and maybe different kind of percussion sounds in the back ground to keep the listeners interested. And the build up could use a lot more risers and sweep ups to create more tensions.
The drop itself could probably use some more work to really hit hard. The main melody is really good but I feel like it was a little weak and could probably be louder and possibly mixed better to help it cut through.
Overall, the song is good but just little things that could really make it stand out from the rest. Keep up the Work!!
on Immortal Featuring ElineForEver by doofus
on Newt - Forever And A Day by Newtdvr
Keep up the work!
on passing time on sunday by pseudoble
Great job!
on Overload by ripzore9191
But this is a great start, so keep it up!
on Pleasure by mudhoen
It is a good start to a banger though, all the elements there.
I feel, for example, 1:00 to 1:30 could have been a much bigger build up either with the snares or the kick or a riser of some sort.
The same thing with around 2:24.
But I love the feeling you are going for, as I am trying to go for the same thing, and keep improving.
Good job!
on Another 80s Wave by BadNode
Great job on the arrangement of the track. I would have to agree on working on the mix and also I really feel it was missing something that would have sent it over the top, possibly a different lead or instrument. But overall, really good.
Keep up the work!
on FALLING APART by KEDIAS
I would say the overall mix could be improved such as the vocals or the bass being a bit louder to really break through the mix.
Keep it up!
on Tiny Marks of Grey by How to Loot Brazil by SignalForTrouble
The vocals are nicely done as well.
Great job
on ginya ginetulin by BarrySeal
With that being said, I do believe it can get a bit repetitive. Maybe adding a breakdown in the middle with different sounds for variety? Or change up the drums here and there to break up the monotony.
But overall a great start man. Keep it up!
on Blueshift by Lek
on Atashi - Cry by ATASHI
Anyways keep up the good work.
on LunnchBoxx - Blaze of Valor by LunnchBoxx
Other than that everything was beautifully written and produced. Great job!
on Younger Music - I Know Better Ft CAROLINE Equinox by 0Equinox0
Did you find the vocal here?
I feel like the song itself could have used more stereo. Like the drums could have been panned more to give the song more space.
But still a great song!!!
on Giving up on love Dj ARN Original Mix by djarn
However, I feel like the track itself is to wide. The bass and some of the drums could be in mono to give the song a more stable base to work with, the vocals work well with being wide though.
All in all though, a great song. Keep up the good work!
on Who I am by Jeffiedillard
Awesome Job!
on To the Infinity by MandeepRajpal
All in all, great job though!
on ERPIC section by seth199
Keep up the good work!