wassup wit it sick track what i liked about it was when you cut da beat off and it comes back on. da instruments you used and da drums were staight too.
all da beats you got would sound straight if you made the chorus stand out more. a chorus has 4bars dat repeat twice. if you don't know how long a bar is it's 1,2,3,4, but you probably know dat incase you didn't dare it is. i like da melodies in da beats and for da choruses dare could be another instrument dat you can spit or sing about da verses. if you put on vocals you have your main vocals and den you have adlibs. adlibs are what emphasize a certain word in a flow or in a chorus. you can put compression or reverb on dem to make your vocals have a certain effect. i got dat adlibs from expertvillage.com. keep making dem sick beats.
wassup wit it beat sounds sick but in my opinion da chorus should have more instruments in dare if you can fit in anymore without it being to busy. da outro usually has a automation clip on it at the last five to ten seconds of da song it fades da song out. i usually put a break in da third verse in between da verse at 8 bars den do da break for 4-8 bars and switch back into da verse for another 8 bars. people got day own style doe deese were some techniques dat i learned from tutorials. when you put in breaks you normally put a sound in dare dat isn't in wit da beat already and it's what gives da beat more spice. dat beat was bangin foreal.
wassup wit it i like da instruments in da song and how it was mixed. Da vocals fit good wit da song. it should be 8 bars for da chorus 8-12-16 for da verse and wit verses you should have 3. 4 if dares another person on da track den you can rap a verse day can rap a verse and repeat it. you can also switch it up when dares more den one person raping. da verses in your song were short to me. in my songs i put a break in between da third verse. i have 16 bar verses so at 8 bars i put da break in. someone told me you should have a fade out and not have a fade in when you do a song. these are tips from my experience on making beats and watching tutorials. dares different ways to do things all types of techniques.
Da song was incomplete wit the instruments. the dude that can rap fast sounded sick but it seemed like the other guy needed some work. You should add at least one instrument to da chorus and da verse each. It sounded good other than that.
This is a good beat how the rolls come in. I also like the song you did on the website you gave me. It had a perfect punch to the drums and the guitar sound was incredible.My friend Alex is trying to get me to make him a reggae beat but im still learning to master a perfect beat. you got skills for sure
my frend ill give u my email ...if you need any help u have just to ask me...and i have sam video were i show haw to use fl to mak a reggue instrument ill publiate it and ill send u the website
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sick wit it on the beat and flow. they were both not too loud and came together to bring it up to a 100 percent. you know how people flow about stuff that don't matter sometimes that wasn't it you can tell it was real. How you rap about your kids and whip that's real.
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