sometimes letting the track breathe, can help it a lot. a few breakdowns or variations too. after a while, the song can seem really repetitive. keep working! hope that helps.
I really enjoyed this one. I can really feel the struggle, willpower, and overcoming within this song. I'm a big fan of cinematic. Did you do all the compositions in this song?
the beginning really threw me off a bit, it started off with gunshots with kids in the background? thought the beat was going to be a little deeper. your track was more upbeat. I say cut the intro out, or replace it something more fitting with the beat? if that makes sense. overall, it was a good track bro. keep it moving!
the beat has a good vibe to it, I'd like to hear another melody or two on your switchups, that'll really add more variance to it. after a min in, it'll tend sound repetitive. or have the track be between 2-2:30 long. overall i dig it, keep it moving!
i really liked the samples you've used. I would ride out the second sample, on maybe the 8th bar of each verse for that switch up. cool track tho!, keep it moving
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