Hey there ,
here are some tips to improve the song. First of all before sending it off for a mix make sure to clean up the vocals performance (big breaths and artefacts). you can compress the vocal so its less dynamic. the BG vocals take away from the mail vocal so you can Eq they at around 1.5-3k Hz because that's where the intelligibility for the human vocal lies. after that balance the instrumentals a bit better compared to vocals. this will get you a bit closer to the point where it can be properly send of for a mix job
on Untitles by Cessangelmusicbaby
here are some tips to improve the song. First of all before sending it off for a mix make sure to clean up the vocals performance (big breaths and artefacts). you can compress the vocal so its less dynamic. the BG vocals take away from the mail vocal so you can Eq they at around 1.5-3k Hz because that's where the intelligibility for the human vocal lies. after that balance the instrumentals a bit better compared to vocals. this will get you a bit closer to the point where it can be properly send of for a mix job
hope this helps
cheers :D
Nate Zky