Around 0:56 the track just stoped, work on the transitions, and arrangememt, good job overall! Try to keep a base layer throughout the track that way it will keep the listen hooked and keep the track from jumping around to much. Like the synt sound very nice! Good Work!
Loved the vocal sample, and love the movie it came from. I could see this track used in the movie. A little slow to start off but when the pad kicked in it gave a nice overall melody, work on the transitions in the track, overall nice work!
I see where your going with this, once this track has some work on the movement, and arrangement in your new PC off course it should be a lot better! Keep it up!
Lost! Try giving the track a base layer i.e. a certain drum riff that will bring your selected synths, pads, key, back in and out..instead of switching from a 4/4 to a Breakbeat! Work on the overall arrangement! Keep up the good work!
Track has movement but overall needs some work, try not to put out a track until it is finished, be patient! take your time and always try to put out the best work possible!
Very jumpy track hard to follow, tone down the flute riff and add some bottom end on the drums to give more punch! I kinda see where your going with this but work on the arrangement and the overall mix, keep it up and this track will shine!
Very Kraftwrek meets KMFDM, good use of sounds, liked the vocal sample at the end wish I could of heard more of it. Add some break downs in the mix to change things up and keep the listener hooked! Good Job and keep it up, you show a lot of talent!
Sounds like someting from a live set, the quick track just started! towards the end I like the way the beat transistioned, a completed version of this track would sound sick!
Good choice on sounds and you had an intro, work on the overall arrangement, track sounds a little bit "Lost in the Sauce", give a base layer something to anchor the track a riff, or a bass line! Overall good work and you show a lot of talent, keep it up!
Thanks Curtis, you are right. I though the vocals may be a bit hot, but was not sure. I think at this point I need to have a remix. Appreciate the review!
Good use of snyth's, good intro, work on the transition around 1:20 sounds like a whole new track was put on! Add a little more compression to help give the track more of a solid feel. I could see this track taking shape, and good use of the bass riff, gave the song a melody.
Would a good way to make that transition around 1:20 be to foreshadow a bit with that new instrument that comes in by bring it in progressively before that point? That's the only that comes to mind to make that happen. I really appreciate your input! Thanks.
Good job on selction of sounds. Sounds more like a preview of a DEMO CD I would by off Big Fish Audio. Needs direction, (Song jumps around) as well a a little more bottom end! Still overall good job and keep it up!
Very hollow beat...needs work on the production side, I could see this beat cleaned up with a nice base riff, some type of synth or pad for melodie...Tone down the overall highs i.e. EQ. Pick a some good sounds, build a drum track with intro, breakdown, middle, and end. Then fill it! This will help the track shine. Good job, keep it up
Love the samples used, tone down the overall mix a little bit that way one sound is not drowning out the other, as well the track is a bit jumpy! going into totaly different riffs, this tack is chill and good overall production skills. Sounds more like a reveiw of a sample CD then an actual track with movenment. Gets a little lost towards the end. Still I dig the Jazz feel with the asian mix!
More of a Dirty Breakt Beat! Good production skills, gets a little lost on the arrangement i.e. Direction but overall great track..Love the vocal sample at the beginning! Mabey could of added a nive base riff to tie in the drum pattern with the piano.
Good start but you loose all direciont around 4:52. I could see this being more of a progressive electronica type track! Work on the arrangement and I think this track will shine!
Dig the track, the vocal is high...add a little more compression to the overall mix to give a little more bottom end. Loving the vocals...Nice work! love the sounds you used.
Nice very tribal, I like the ending vocal sample..I whish there where a little more house styled sounds a-la some pad's or organ's to give it that real house feel...but over all tight track, nice progression
Thankyou for stopping by and reviewing my track.
I get what you are saying about the pads and organs I have been searching for just those types of sounds lately so if you know of any good sample cds with those kind of sounds drop me an e-mail.
By the way welcome to looperman:)
Regards
Krook
good job, tone down the overall EQ, add a little more bottom end to the track, nice arrangement and good snynths with vocal samples...keep up the good work
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