CalifKen

Super freaking sweet sounds! very very nice package here.

ha ha D! fkn love 2:51, this just gets better every minute.

rock and roll!!

i love it. if anything? somehow make the beat louder without actually making it louder. hmmm....

OMG. LOVE THE PIANO.

OH SH!!! Love the way you are singing.

Wow. I want to do something with this!

I'm letting you know.

can i can i can i

HOLY EFFEN EFFEN F. This is really really good.

EFFEN FRESH as FRESH can EFFEN be.

that was great guys. really great.

IF ANYTHING love the production! and the vox! but the vox maybe sounds a touch like it has a tinny sort of reverb on it - that sounds cool, but also seems like it keeps it from being the like top 40 kind of track it seems to be.

good stuff.

I swear I would love to spend just an evening with you - i bet it would be sooooo cool. You are such a lovely singer and really just exude this lovely, far but close, feminine beauty and essence-glowy aura.

I love your voice. You just need to hook up with the right person and you could have a full on career. Do love hearing you.

And you're so lovely!! how u been?

ew That's sweet. Nice crunchy rythym moving sorta epic progression - very nice. I would love to hear like Izotope's Trash distortion plugin on the guitars here to just really make them pop and out and up front. Cool stuff! enjoyed.

fk.

if you keep going this way, and just make it a little more psyche-playful with some human elements like breath and girls gasping in pleasure or pain or ... oh i get it the music is doing that to her. that kind of stuff....

or just keep goin this way, cuz it sounds cool and very modern. good stuff.

this is nice. cool work. lol i love oasis. she's funny.

very dark dirty night type sh here - love it.

ha this is really nice. you REALLY REALLY captured that feeling ... well done.

Holy shi........

you are really really great aren'tcha?

:) I LOVE THIS, love the melody of the I don't really knows the way they just roll down across like .... great phrasing, really good magne!!!

Hey man really really nice work. I love it. ur quite the songwriter! is this all you?

If i might suggest doing some sort of vocal harmony line alongside the current vocals, here and there, not straight through, but at parts. that could be amazing, that could absolutely be a hit song.

really great stuff!

Wow. Wow wow ....

You sound beautiful in this. Ok fk this is going to be one of those tracks where I have to keep pausing it to get out everything I want to say.

1:37 WINDOW love the vibrato there, lovely tasty electro morsel right there. That's the essence of great music what you did there.

0:45 Something very special about the way you do that. The first time it was playing through I actually shuddered and made like a gasping or groaning sound because of the shuddering.

## Just an idea, but the sun part where you hold it, and other parts where it is held, might sound cool with you layering that with you barely breathing the words on top, so breathy whispered "the suuuuuunnnnn".

Did you produce this too? It's super solid.

But absolutely what makes it special are the vocals - they are soaring, which you are a master of. How often do you consider that you are the angel? Because that is what you voice has all the attributes to represent, as does your heart brother.

Big applause. Loved this. D/l fav. Cheers.xo

This is the sweetest attention to detail I've heard D. I love it cuz it represents a lot of things in parallel - both chill, sad, trippy, despair, and uplifting - somehow all together. And that's just at the base structure. Beyond that, there are more messages which are beautiful and that I will continue to decipher. Thanks for including me on the evolution of this one - it's lovely - and I really love this version most of all.

that opening thing you did was freaking sweet. very much swinging. love it.

the lead synth might be just a smidge "tangy" I guess for lack of a better word, but once it chills out a bit and is lower, that's the sh. Really good stuff bro.

Really moving!! in the physical way,. Nice work.

super smooth and nice. very relaxing evening sort of vibe. nice werk!

Lovely stuff Brian. Grrrrrreat nicest jazz i've heard in a while. magical.

i like this!! i would like to hear the dirtier synth that comes in a bit early, cuz for a few moments there, it just sounded to clean. i make really dirty stuff tho, so ....

ew!! love the flute. it makes all the cleanliness beautiful actually. so i'd maybe bring in touches of the flute earlier cuz they give this a really wonderful, crystalline spring sort of flavor. nice work!!

ROFLMAO love it. :)

really good phrasing on these bits. cool work.

chill synths that come in!!... :D

This is so with your flavor all through it. And I love your flavor man. Probably heard you for the first time about a year ago, and your vibe just about feels like a brand. Really cool, unique and fresh. Great work bro.

i jumped on his sh peeps!!! ew look. cool pool. i'm getting in.

harmonschmize nice singing buddy.

PHA KING AWESOME. LOVE IT.

REALLY REALLY feeling this, especially with that description. this is very good - i feel remarkably connected with it as i listen to it. nice work! keep on.

As well you should be Mr. Vickers.

This is really great in a lot of ways. Love the music. Love the vocals + lyrics. Love what you are doing with your voice A LOT. You've really progressed since I last heard from you.

Did you do this all yourself you 9astar9? Holy frack.

Wow. I love it bro.

My gosh. Great stuff. A plauuuuuuusee.

Ha I've done this same thing with an array of clips - can be very useful.

Need to vary this first thing quicker.

Great bassy sound comes in, love that.

You say this ain't a track well it should be.

When the trippy synths start going up to like the minute mark, it should then bust into something melodic and epic, that would be ....
welll

epic!
Liked it !!

Yeh I look at your rev's fav's you are the most effective artist I've seen on the loop in the year I've been hear. And damn if I ain't feeling why right now.

Hey if you still need a singer for the chorus, my partner Mike might be right for it - https://www.looperman.com/users/detail/288600 - let me know. Great great track. So fresh. Love the vibe. Super fresh and such a good fresh vibe that it resets my soul and makes me feel like I want to go out into day and do the great, best and funnest things with all the world. Love that vibe. Great work.