nodded my head a bit and i hate hip hop kinda shit but urs is alright. u Have to work on ur lirics though..... lots of it sounded very childish. use a thesaurese or somthing to use more strongert words. example:thers a bomb inside my head ready to burst my brain?? wtf that sounds like a 5 year old wrote it
on World Needs Help by Lil Frost by LILFROST