you are a old soul i can tell that you like to blend and bend sounds and there are very few young people who can fill the funk you can and this is coming from a 50 yr old head. go to work!
I LIKE THE IDEA BUT THE DRUMS DON'T FIT IN WITH THE GUITARS,BUT THATS MY OPINION TRY MAKING IT MORE SIMPLE [THE SONG] AND AD RYTHEM TO IT. DON'T DO SO MANY CHANGE UPS REWORK IT TURN OF THE LIGHTS AND LET IT FLOW IT WILL COME TO YOU IF YOU FILL IT.GOOD LUCK.
im a old school cat you show promise and potetial work hard and stay focused and bring the vocales down a taste so they dont over shadow the beats peace and hair grease.
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