Good job you two! Pretty music and a nice smooth essence here, laid back. The vocals were good, but I wouldn't use the flanger fx on them, but would go with more the reverb route. The beginning of the track I wasnt sure I was going to hear words, and the nanana later on muddies up from hearing your lyrics clearly. I would recommend not having the lyrics being sung at the same time as the melodic hum. Have them clearly in their own places. That is my only critique. I thought you both did a bang up job!
thank you very much for your comments and time. i agree with you in everything you said. this was a very early track, and tho i wont change whats finished i will keep that in mind in future work.
I like the Guitar Bond 1 hit you used throughout the track. At the end(after the cheering) when Magnito says his bit, it seems out of place with the rest of the track, but overall, good synths, good sounds. One of the commentors said that it is missing something, and he is right. The vocals, the flow. But let a person rap over this and it will be complete. Nice job.
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