Nice track! Great instrumental. Sound is nice and crisp.
Noticed you were from Tuscon. I used to live in Mesa for a little while. Love it out there minus all the tweakers.
"Never knowing where im going always facing Arizona, bound to the valley of the sun" - CIR
Sounds like you need to adjust a few small things. When using the Slicex or the FruitySlicer you need to change the polyphony to 1 and set both cut rates to 0 (Zero). It will let the chops stop right when the next one is played no matter how long it is. It give you the effect of using an MPC.
Its alright for a first go at it. Drums held things together nicely. But your chops werent fluid as they should be. What program you rockin? If you use FL Studio I could give you some advice on how to get that "glitchyness" vibe out of there.
Yo,...love the flows. Nice relaxed track. THe hook brought me in but the first verse kept me there. I really like this man. If you are interested in working with me let me know. Im always looking for the right MC to take us both to the top. Check out some of my work. Have my rnb tracks on my last page. Kudos man!
Love this one dude! Video was cool as hell too. How much of the song is actually true? Sounds like some of it may actually be real no joking around but its hard to tell with you haha.
Thanks Conan. All of its real, even down to "bologna sammitches is what im eatin'" I actually had to town down the real life stuff to make it class friendly
Damn that little hook vocal is nice. Good flows from you as usual. I think the beat is nice. Sometimes simple is good but I think just a little more could be added to the beat. But all in all good stuff. Im diggin it man.
Yo man. You fastly becoming one of my fav artists here on the Loop. Always rocking raw verses and you pick some good beats to ride on. Beats I would pick myself. Dude killed it on the hook too. Sounds like some straight industry shht. Kudos again man!
Really appreciate your reviews man. Nice when someone appreciates lyrics and flow despite the production of the recording. Yeah young marquis on the hook. It was an open acapella that I had to jump on. Thanks a lot CIR!
This is pretty nice right here man. Hot flows and a raw upbeat instrumental. I think I saw the pella for this up. I may remix this one myself. Kudos to you and Slick.
Im suprised there isnt more reviews. This is raw man. Who is Anno Domini? That mofo is sick with the beats. You can ride the shht outta a beat man. Hella props! Too bad its so short lol.
Lol yeah is real short. Just something I quickly wrote years back. Thanks for the compliments, good coming from someone such as yourself. Anno Domini are a relatively big production label. They post up a lot of free beats each week. All free for non profit. Google them. Amazing talent. Ima check your page shortly to hear your latest stuff. Thanks again
Dang this beat is hypnotic. Jedi Mind Tricks feel. Great flows man. I wouldnt expect anything less really. Ive been sleepin on your work man. Im about to peep some more of your stuff.
Sounds good man. Nice and clear. Flow is raw. Love the tone of voice. Beat is thumping. Only thing I noticed is the beat seems to be more in the left channel rather than centered and split equally with a stereo width adjusted but that is easily overlooked. Good work man!
We tried to go as raw as possible. The beat came with the scratch hook on it. I beleive it's end transmission on the cuts. Thanks for swinging through CIR!
Haha,...I usually dont leave you reveiws but I dig this track man. Reminds me of Oasis. Mabey its the accent with the vocals and the acoustic backing. Noticed the vox arent centered but easily over looked. Pretty cool track bud!
Nice work man. Industried that azz. Sounds like some sort of commercial pop beat. Some Sara Barellis (not sure how she spells it) Like her and B.O.B. collabing on it or something. Faved.
Dang! This is ill. Lovely soft touch. I think those bells around the 1:20 mark could go. Other than that this is raw. My kinda shht right here man. Hope the rest of your stuff is like this. Been sleepin on you I guess. (Damn bells back around the 2:40 mark. lol)
You rap? I get down a little bit. We could trade beats and pull a Dilla/Adlib move. haha.
lol thanks. I only put the bells in there cause I couldn't think of an instrument that would fit the melody well & I didn't wanna kill the whole track with an instrument taking over the chorus. But yeah man, a Dilla/Madlib like collaboration sounds great! Let's do it
Ayyy,...whats up man? Been awhile since I run into you. Just saw you got some new pellas up. Im gonna have to check em out and get a Coney VS ShawnLat 2 going.
Anyway,...about the track....
The beat is pretty nice. Not my normal style but pretty infectious.
Groovy and catchy. Flow sounds good too. I like the panning work,...came out proper.
Thank famo, you know we got to keep the mid west in motion. You know what to do with the pellas....put some magic to them like you do. Yep all of the beat i flow on, i make them...New to the beat thing though....it seems like i'm making more beats than songs but it's all good though. When i get a flow i try and make a beat around it..like i did with this one....but any time you ready to collab get at me fam....shawnlat
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Noticed you were from Tuscon. I used to live in Mesa for a little while. Love it out there minus all the tweakers.
"Never knowing where im going always facing Arizona, bound to the valley of the sun" - CIR
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Dola is back!
PS... Its a Mexican guy in your track. My buddy Troy. lol
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I heard him rapping Airplanes to
this track... LMAO
but yeah a lil more mainstream than
me usual, thought id switch up a lil!
Always appreciate tha great reviews fam!
Much Respect from LA
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Anyway,...about the track....
The beat is pretty nice. Not my normal style but pretty infectious.
Groovy and catchy. Flow sounds good too. I like the panning work,...came out proper.
You make beats too?