Sounds good. Only thing I can pick at is you added some vocals for an intro. No vocals. I know it seems stupid but yeah no vocals. I dont want someone to throw some slick vocals on a track and win a BEAT making competiton largley inpart due to the vocals. I know that is not what you did by any means. But I added the no vocals rule for that reason and to keep it simple instead of making a ton of different stipulations as to which way you can do vocals I just kept it at no vocals period. Just take the intro vox out and you will be all good!
Yeah you posted early. Make sure you follow the instructions next time around. I wont hold it against you. Seems like you did start the early posting trend though. In any event good luck to you!
Great stuff! From the instrumental to the flow,...just stellar! Loved it man! You gotta Grieves feel about your flow. If you never heard of him check him out. Im sure you would dig him. Again man,...awesome track. Easily faved!
Just swinging through to show some more love to this track. I love it. you did a stellar job on this. Just gotta get this mix fixed. I get this stuck in my head. Listen to it everyday! Need more of this type stuff! Awesome!
i didnt notice. thats what happens when you make a track in 15min, then post it immediately, cause you want some quick feedback. i ll have a second listen and see if i cant tweak it.
cheers for the listen adn the review!
I think the metal aspect of this is straight. Gotta slipknot feel to it. I think the lyrics need a little cleared up and raised in volume. The distortion on the vox is ok for the Corey Taylor vibe mabey just decrease it a little. Cool track though! I was diggin it. Def reminded me of the way Taylor flows on the first Slipknot album. The guitar work reminded me of the knot at times as well. Will probably come back for another listen sometime. Good stuff man!
It's funny but I've always been a Slipknot fan. Too bad I don't have Taylor's voice but who does? All the lyrics were done in one take. Can't wait to get some better equipment and see if I can improve the overall sound of my music. Until then, I just work on the ideas. Thanks for the advice!
Sounds great. Kinda gotta life house feel to it lol. You write some great stuff. Real song writers type stuff. Quality at that. Kudos on this man! Faved!
Yeah this is dope. The hook is raw business. I know others talked about the vox but I think the beat shines threw. Beat/ chorus vox are stellar! Faved it great work!
Thanks for the fav Coney! I think I nedd to redo the mix though. Thez is right. I can hear some clipping. I'll get at you this week about that track I was talking about. Peace bro.
Nice man! Havent heard anything from you in awhile. You already know I think you sing pretty good. Im not sure what it is about the mix but the Stereo aspect seems to be a little lopsided to the right. Other than that great mellow track. Super smooth.
Sounds good man! Nice and clean mix. Great job! I always enjoy your stuff. you got some talent! On vocals and on the g tar! Nice and simple track,....sometimes simple is better. Just an acoustic or two and some simple drums plus great vocals = the shht! Kudos man,..faved!
Nice! I like what you did with this! I love the vocal harmonizing. I cant wait till you send the vox my way so I can get a better mix. Def loving the track! Tore it up on the flow as well. You are an over looked talent on this site and its always nice to work with you. Keep up the great work.
I noticed you said in the descrip you said you did the beat. lol,...typo?
Ok man,...I figured it out. You have the songs titled wrong. This is my track here. Lol,...I heard the other one and thought you had mabey chopped it up and added your own drums or something. lol Like I said in the review I couldnt figure it out. Now I see whats up.
Ok,...so in any event. This is awesome too! Dig it as well! Great flows. You tear it up man. The track sounds alive now! Great stuff! Another fav!
lol ..... i really don't put finished work on hear more of an sample u digg but i definetly feel u i just like sharing heat when i make it thanx for comin thur 1
I kinda get what you were talking about when you compared our two tracks. Similar in fashion! I like the molodies youve come up with on this. Lots of stuff going on and it all compliments itself with one another. I dig the little breakdown on the drums about 2 min into the track.
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I was diggin it. Low notes on a piano part somewhere sound outta key but other than that pretty smooth yet busy track. Cool stuff!
cheers for the listen adn the review!
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Ok,...so in any event. This is awesome too! Dig it as well! Great flows. You tear it up man. The track sounds alive now! Great stuff! Another fav!
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