you use most of the loops i use in my dubsteps but in a different way. I like it. Dubstep doesn't have to be insanely structured, and you definately took advantage of that aspect of the genre. keep working.
I really like your direction with this. I think you could kind of do a white rabbit type effect and crescendo all the way to the climax, then decrescendo to the end. amazing work.
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