It's a nice track, that sample stab is very nicely done and the drums are good too. Maybe just one more element needed to bring the whole thing together. Try adding a section with a more constant hi-hat too. Will help to bring all the elements together. Good work tho, keep them coming.
Sounds big once the vocal and drums come in man, if It were my track I'd cut down the intro a little bit. Nice tho fam, very nasty and well realised once everything comes in.
Thanks mate. have to say, having listened to some of yours, im willing to listen to your advice. i may well mess with that intro. not really happy with the transition. wasnt so bad with the vocals on it, but since i took them off it sounds a bit weird to me.
Lol at the Budgie on the TechDeck, haven't seen one of those in like 10 years.... I mean a Techdeck, not a Budgie ON a Techdeck.
Tracks got some cool idea in it man, It's obviously early days for you at the moment, but you have a good ear for fitting sounds together. So keep going and you'll get there. Keep them coming and good luck fam.
Thanks for the encouragement. Yes, early days, but I'll keep plugging away. My mixing and arranging needs work, but I'm using headphones and PC speakers, so it's hit and miss.
It's crying out for a 4x4 kickdrum man, the vocal is out of tune with the song too. Needs some work man, but potentially a good track. Just needs more work on structure that vocal removed and a 4x4 kick throughout and it will take a little more shape. But hey, that's just my opinion. Keep them coming man.
EDIT: yeah 4x4 kick drum is the classic sounding kick drum pattern in hard core and dance stuff. Means 4 kicks in a bar, so a kick drum every beat. Don't have to do that, but that's the classic method, and that's what I'd do. Hope it helps mate.
4x4 Kickdrum? True but i liked the vocal so i putted in the song :)
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My eyes must be going at first when I saw your pic I thought you were balding with a badly sunburnt head! Lol, on closer inspection you just have a a cool haircut. : )
The tracks nice man, got an authentic old-school, hard-core sound. Some nice synth elements and I like the scratch to break up the beat. Maybe get one more section in there to give it a big chance at some point, change the direction or the key and drop a middle 8 in there. Nice track anyway fam.
ehh, now that we did the parody those r the only lyrics i think of..it be hard to do a serious version after, especially since i don't like kesha..lol but thanks for the idea and taking a listen :D
Word,...Im going to finish it up tonight. Im not sure wether or not I have your e mail.
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Some good ideas in here man, maybe bring that little percussive synth in a little earlier and keep it a little more constant though the track. Really brings it up to a next level. Keep em coming fam.
At first it sounded a bit typical of Dubstep, but then the vocal-synth came in and changed it up nicely. That bits fresh, synths are well placed in that section, got a nice swing to it. Big.
Wow, your drum work is excellent. Those drums are very serious. Is that a loop at the start of the track or is that you? If you made those drums, much respect. Your stuff sounds like Necro making a Dupstep track.
i like it man, who's the vocalist? Is that a Looper? Or just a random MC? Like it anyway. Good solid beat and you've chosen the sounds well to suit the vocal.
Boom. The synth that comes in at 1.25 is heavy. Very nice touch. I like your synth choices.
The drums are sick, the Trumpet isn't up to those drums tho. I'd try something else If I were you. The scratch and the drums are ill tho man. Keep hip hop alive.
Good beat and good hook man. Lyrics don't appear that out of time to me, just a slightly different flow. A couple of them maybe, the hook is slightly late in places.
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Tracks got some cool idea in it man, It's obviously early days for you at the moment, but you have a good ear for fitting sounds together. So keep going and you'll get there. Keep them coming and good luck fam.
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EDIT: yeah 4x4 kick drum is the classic sounding kick drum pattern in hard core and dance stuff. Means 4 kicks in a bar, so a kick drum every beat. Don't have to do that, but that's the classic method, and that's what I'd do. Hope it helps mate.
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The tracks nice man, got an authentic old-school, hard-core sound. Some nice synth elements and I like the scratch to break up the beat. Maybe get one more section in there to give it a big chance at some point, change the direction or the key and drop a middle 8 in there. Nice track anyway fam.
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Haha! Again, I could do something mental under this. Keep them coming man, best MC I've heard on looper.
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Should send me the accapella for this man, I'll put a crazy beat under this. The beat is sick, don't get me wrong. But I got some ideas for this.
Let me know man. Regardless, keep them coming man.
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Boom. The synth that comes in at 1.25 is heavy. Very nice touch. I like your synth choices.
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