Agree with DjD, very good for a 13 year old. Accapella fits the beat nicely too, just need to beef up the drums a bit. Maybe try layering some of the hits with other samples, like 2 or 3 kicks layered over each other, same with the snare, but use all different samples. Doesn't work if you put copies of the same samples over each other. Also put a limiter on your output/master track. Then it won't distort when you layer your drums up, most dance producers have a limiter on there master track as standard.
Yeah I agree that it needed a little bit more variety and better percussion samples than the default FL Studio samples. I also wasn't really good at equalization at the time, so the kick wasn't as powerful (But I've improved with EQ'ing since then) I also removed a default limiter from the master track because the bass was, I guess "Choking" the other sounds out. Thanks for the review and i'll take the advice that you have given me. =-)
interesting beat man, know that melody from a classical piece but can't remember which one. You put a good spin on it man. Twisted track in a good way. Keep them coming man.
cool track man, like the pitch bent synth that comes in that's a nice touch. It's good to test yourself and make a "piece" rather than a beat sometimes. Nice stuff.
I take it your a fan of out school Outkast stuff? Reminds me of some really old school O.K stuff. No track in particular, but it's got that vibe. Big beat.
Nice track fam, if it were mine I'd probably replace the guitar sound with something else. It's got some good ideas in there tho man, keep them coming.
Big track man, synth work is legit. Filthy in the best possible way. I've only tried a track like this once myself, and I know how difficult it is, but you got it down nicely. Keep them coming man. Sounds like you like your oldschool hardcore. Nice.
thank you for your critics. Its a new experience for me to make music with samples. In ancient times, in the eightees, I played bass and guitar in in punk and psychedelic hardcore local bands in munich, but now I get older, and I am to lazy to organize a band. Its easier to make it with the PC.
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Thanks alot. The Producer is Pale Soul of Headlock Muzak. He's currently working on my album and that track might or might not be on it. The beat is exclusively mine though so you'll need to purchase a different one from him, but thank you for the comment. Good Looks.
thanks for takin time to check it out. i kept tryin to add some kind of scratching in there but they never sounded that great. all I could get was like a reverse effect on my drums(kinda sounds close to scratchin) towards the end. back to more tutorials! hm yeah that was kind of a random tangent but just thought of some of your tracks! haha anyways thanks again et!
Cool track man, how much of it is loops from here? Regardless, they're well selected and tastefully put together. I make and know hip hop and this is a good beat. Just needs some EQ on the samples in the background, they sound a little flat at times. Keep them coming man, check me out sometime.
yeh in the melo are some parts that needs to be equalized well,thank´s for the tip and thank´s for support to =) can you send me your email to make some connection ? peace
Interesting track fam, maybe double up the kick and get a fat sounding snare or clap in there too. Bit of percussion with a delay could be nice too. Like it man, keep them coming.
EDIT: Not sure mate, you should try all sorts of different ones and see what sound the best. As for doubling the drums, that works on most hip hop and dance tracks, pretty much always sounds better, but you have to mix one of the two snares or kicks lower than the other. I take it you're already putting a limiter on your master channel too? Pretty much all dance producers do. Good luck mate.
thank you for listening ET. Always great to hear your input :) What kind of percussion were you thinking of? I will, buying a Yamaha KX8 88-key now! Hoping that will help me take my beats to the next level. Learn some basic music theory as well, there's so incredibly much to learn! :D
Like it man, nicely put together and good to hear some Garage esc drums on here. It's potentially a sick track man, just need to work on it a little more. Keep them coming.
Naughty. Cool track man, need to work on the EQ and compression etc a little, all the elements are a little flat right now. Need to bring the drums out a little, crisp and beef them up a bit with some EQ. Maybe whack a big distortion on the bass too, just something to make it stand out. Got some good elements in there man, keep them coming.
Aight, I'll give it a whirl. I played it VLC and it wasn't flat there (eq was off). But yeah I'll play around with it a lil more. Thanks for listening and the advice.
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Like the beat man, fits well with the acca, high synth is nice too. Keep them coming.
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Is that you on the hook too? Or is that the guy that made the beat? NIce track and bars either way fam.
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Cool track, the intro is great, good to hear someones normal speaking voice on here. Like the synths in this, keep them coming man.
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EDIT: Not sure mate, you should try all sorts of different ones and see what sound the best. As for doubling the drums, that works on most hip hop and dance tracks, pretty much always sounds better, but you have to mix one of the two snares or kicks lower than the other. I take it you're already putting a limiter on your master channel too? Pretty much all dance producers do. Good luck mate.
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Guitars are nice in this too, sounds good when it all gets going. Looking forward to a finished vocaled version. Keep them coming man.
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