ImproveWithError

ImproveWithError

Need more time to write and record
Lafayette IN, United States
Joined : 12th Nov 2008 - 17 years ago
Last Online : 5th Feb 2026 - 8 months ago
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ImproveWithError has posted 974 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ImproveWithError 19th May 2010 17:18 - 16 years ago

on Ready to Go by JHolmes
keep up the practice, sounds like you are using nothing but down strokes,is that intentional?
JHolmes
JHolmes replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I'm still very much a beginner to the guitar; picking isn't my strong point (well, nothing is, really). I do that whole new-to-guitar strum too hard thing, so I've been focusing on holding the pick more loosely. Unfortunately, switching from upstrokes to downstrokes causes me to chuck my pick into the sound hole half the time.

Changing from upstrokes to downstrokes either changes the timing on the bass string being plucked and throws my rhythm off or throws my strumming off when I try to compensate to keep the E/A string on beat.

I'll focus more on strumming patterns after I start to consistently muting strings with my left hand only when I mean to.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 19th May 2010 16:47 - 16 years ago

on One Like You by MoreBeats
Great lyrics, this has a nice flow to it, overall a really good song. Keep up the good work.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 19th May 2010 16:38 - 16 years ago

on Orchestral by SweeneyMusic
Nice job on this the violins really drive this track, keep up the work.
SweeneyMusic
SweeneyMusic replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Appreciate the listen! Thanks
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 21:12 - 16 years ago

on Wonderwall by ChrisHall
Hey, I like you interpretation of the song, nice to hear it done differently from the original, you should try adding some strings or something like that to help give it a bigger sound. The recording quality is great. Nice job man.
ChrisHall
ChrisHall replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Got loads of uni work to do man haha I will add them when its done :)

Thank you for the listen and review man..i always apreciate it :)

Chris
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 21:01 - 16 years ago

on Perception by thnknde
Cool track, nice use of different sound, it really make the song stand out.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:56 - 16 years ago

on Puppy Fat by JaNjYp
Nice track, has a very easy flowing sound to it, nice work on this one.
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ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:43 - 16 years ago

on Casijam by Funkman
welcome to the site man, this track has a real nice sound to a real nice jazzy funk sound to it, nice quality, keep it up.
Funkman
Funkman replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks man I appreciate I am still new at this.will catch some of yours later

cheers
wannafunk
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ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:41 - 16 years ago

on Show just start by Alen9R
nice track here man, this needs some good vocals on it and it will be over the top good , keep up the good work.
Alen9R
Alen9R replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks,man!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:40 - 16 years ago

on Pen and Paper by Effluence
nice words with this, I like how you panned back and forth, gives it a nice feel.
Effluence
Effluence replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks so much
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:38 - 16 years ago

on Crystal City by WARRIORDANIKA
Good lyrics, I really like when the song picks up the pace, good job keep it up.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:28 - 16 years ago

on Deepest Darkness by Cybertooth
Man this has a really dark sound to it, really cool song, not much to say other than good job.
Cybertooth
Cybertooth replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
then thanks for the review!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:26 - 16 years ago

on Somewhere by mustyputt
Nice music with this one, has a nice clear sound to it, keep it up man.
mustyputt
mustyputt replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:19 - 16 years ago

on Tell me by mustyputt
Not bad, the lyrics are very well written, the vocals are pretty good a few pitch problems in spots, but not bad, keep it up.
mustyputt
mustyputt replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Man, do I wish I could really sing! I mainly put down the ideas as best I can. Would love for a real singer to hit this.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:15 - 16 years ago

on Mandy by Lundi
very nice, has a smooth feel to it, this has a nice genre cross to it, very catchy beat, everything about this is great, keep it well worth the listen, adding this to my favs.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:13 - 16 years ago

on Strange Little Girl by overlappingcircles
Really good job with this, the entire track has a real nice quality to it, keep it up man.
overlappingcircles
overlappingcircles replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks for the listen and review :)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th May 2010 20:09 - 16 years ago

on Shut it down by hotzys
Really good track man has a nice flow to it, very professional sounding, welcome to the site and keep up the good work.
hotzys
hotzys replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks and mos def, ill keep the tracks coming.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 20:50 - 16 years ago

on Illusion by After_The_End
Nice one here, I like it the way it is, has a nice flow to it, doesn't get repetitive or anything. Nice job on this one, keep it up.
ImproveWithError
Wow man you guys out did yourselves on this one, super catchy, Mista Mista, BigReeg are killing it, really nice flow, love the beat. Going to add this to the favs for sure. Hats off to you guys, I hope there are future collabs, I am very impressed!!!!
CONEYISLANDRECORDS
CONEYISLANDRECORDS replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the kind words man! Yeah I got that hook I chopped up and peiced together stuck in my head. Glad you dig it man!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 01:05 - 16 years ago

on Sick N Tired by Jgreenbeatz
Awesome dude, you have great voice, nice and versatile, keep it up man, great job as usual.
Jgreenbeatz
Jgreenbeatz replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
no doubt, i appreciate it homie!!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 01:00 - 16 years ago

on Bitter Sweet by Steinaa ft Chrilsh by ChrisHall
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ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 00:54 - 16 years ago

on Mirrors and Smoke by biffsteelmeetsjohnnyparty
Great track, you don't sound like you are tying to sound like linkin park at all, but then again that dude didn't spell trying correctly either. Keep it up man, also you should try reviewing other peoples tracks more, it will get you more listens and reviews. later
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 00:49 - 16 years ago

on Down Ass Chick by imajen
Nice track, has a nice flow to it, a parts distort on my headphones, could be them. Good track though, has a real nice sound to it.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 14th May 2010 00:46 - 16 years ago

on Cut the Strings by BlueSkyBleedingBlack
nice sounding distortion, definetly needs vocals, I don't listen to whole lot of metal, but the overall sound of this was pretty good, keep it up!!!!
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 13th May 2010 18:57 - 16 years ago

on Meet You In the Later Life by BrianMaiden407
very cool track, conveys a ton of emotion. this has bit of "in the air" feel to it, sorry to hear about the loss. Keep strong
BrianMaiden407
BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks so much Improve! and thanks for the positives!!

Bm;)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 11th May 2010 17:22 - 16 years ago

on In My Hands (Sharper Claws) by minette
Great track, has a nice quality to it, great vocals as always, nice job with this one.
minette
minette replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks so much... appreciate the comment and the listen :)
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