ImproveWithError

Need more time to write and record

Lafayette IN, United States

Joined : 12th Nov 2008 - 17 years ago

Last Online : 5th Feb 2026 - 8 months ago

ImproveWithError comments on tracks

ImproveWithError has posted 974 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ImproveWithError 26th Jul 2010 23:58 - 16 years ago

on Solar by SoundBoy

I never listened to dubstep before until I started using this site, songs like this make like a lot. Good work man, is there ever lyrics or are they always instrumental? Dumb question, but I never hear lyrics on here.

SoundBoy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Not a dumb question at all mate, there can be lyrics, alot of dubstep is purely instrumental with tune being driven by the basssline and drums.

However there lots of great dubstep tunes out there with vocals, whether it be agressive grime style raps such as this Joker and tempa T mashup http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Smz76A3C_FA,

Or the more trancey/housey, hands in the air style vocals that Artists such as Nero use
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GV1bI7xLnf8

Or the darker rnb style vocals that burial uses.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IlEkvbRmfrA

These are just a few examples, some of my faves i guess, theres heaps other great examples out there, but check em out there all very good tracks.

Ive used a few vocal samples in some of my tracks, not quite as effective as those examples lol

Glad you liked my track :)

ImproveWithError 26th Jul 2010 19:59 - 16 years ago

on Unfinished business by jjy

Awesome track man, a lot of emotion to it, are you going to add vocals? If you are not I would really like to see if I can write something that would go with this, it is too good to be an instrumental only. Great job man, one of the best acoustic tracks I have heard.

jjy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

hit me up on the email. if youd like to give it a shot. =] i'll be checking my email. when your done be sure to email me and tell me so i can hear it.

ImproveWithError 26th Jul 2010 19:52 - 16 years ago

on Imma Rule the World Feat FarishaMusic by yeshintae

Nice job with this, this is the best track I have heard with my loop. Its nice to hear how you took something that I didn't know what to do with, and turn it into something amazing. The vocals sound awesome on this. Keep it up man.

yeshintae replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

AHAHAHA
THANKS FAM'!

imma LUVIN' your loops & samples!
you've got SKILLZ me friend!

i THANK YOU for droppin' through
and LISTENIN'/REVIEWIN' this track!
You can MOS'DEF expect more tracks from
me with YOUR LOOPS in 'em! i'll keep
ya updated when i use one!

KEEP BANGIN' EM!
PEACE

Much Respect from LA

ImproveWithError 24th Jul 2010 21:28 - 16 years ago

on Run by Jbuddy03

Nice job with this, I really like beat you put with my loop. Keep it up man

ImproveWithError 24th Jul 2010 21:24 - 16 years ago

on Dark Guitar by davidzcy

Nice one man, love what you did with the loop. Keep it up man this was good.

davidzcy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

i like the acoustic feel,thank u. but i don't know why i can't put my lines in ur page.

ImproveWithError 24th Jul 2010 21:23 - 16 years ago

on Titanium Feat Farisha Haque by iConGrimes

Great beat to this track, nice vocals as well, overall a pretty good listen.

ImproveWithError 21st Jul 2010 16:06 - 16 years ago

on Domestic by KomlinK

I like what you have done with this, the intro piano remind of a song by OneRepublic called "Made for You". Good job with what you have so far, I don't really have any advice, just wanted to let you know I like it.

ImproveWithError 21st Jul 2010 16:02 - 16 years ago

on Hello Guildford Hello London Final demo by phantomhim

Nice job as always man, love the beat, and the flow is right on as usual. I like the flute? that is used, gives it a nice unique feel to the song. Keep it man.

phantomhim replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thank you fam, yeah the beat is heavy-weight. Glad you're feeling the flows too man. Thanks again.

ImproveWithError 19th Jul 2010 22:19 - 16 years ago

on Why by Heisenberg

Great track has Flobots feel to it. Love the strings, for me they are the highlight of the track.

Heisenberg replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

I love the flobots! So that might be where that came from. Much respect though, Im glad you enjoyed it

ImproveWithError 19th Jul 2010 17:35 - 16 years ago

on shine by damonmusic2010

Nice track, good to hear that it is playing now, I really like the sound of the music, the vocals are a bit hard to hear, but overall a very nice track. Keep it up man.

ImproveWithError 19th Jul 2010 14:14 - 16 years ago

on lets get messed up feat Nate Monoxide by hammertime17

good job on this, the beat works really well with the vocals, keep it up man.

ImproveWithError 19th Jul 2010 14:13 - 16 years ago

on shine by damonmusic2010

Not sure if it is me but I can't get this to play anything.

ImproveWithError 19th Jul 2010 14:10 - 16 years ago

on Im Gone by BigReeg

Nice one man, sound pretty good, has a real nice flow to it.

BigReeg replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thanks for the review

ImproveWithError 17th Jul 2010 15:26 - 16 years ago

on Daoki by JohnnyHunter

Nice track is that you playing? Has a nice relaxing feel, great job.

JohnnyHunter replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Hi there, Yes i recorded it through a cheap headset microphone :D Thanks for the comment and listening!

ImproveWithError 15th Jul 2010 20:44 - 16 years ago

on I Will Rule - Ft FarishaMusic And Big Reeg by CONEYISLANDRECORDS

Damn man every time I hear one your track I am blown away, you did a great job with track, love everything about it. Great beat and the vocals put everything over the top. Great work man, keep it up!!!!

CONEYISLANDRECORDS replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thats awesome to hear man! I aim to please! lol actually I just make shht that I would like to listen to. lol Im kinda selfish I guess. Glad you dig my work man! Appreciate the support!!!

ImproveWithError 15th Jul 2010 20:34 - 16 years ago

on Its Your Birthday by Reyer

Nice job with this track, you have really good voice, the lyrics are well written as well. Keep it up this is a good overall production.

Reyer replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thank you for your kind words. I really wanted this to mean something to her. I hope to make more great tracks in the (near) future.

ImproveWithError 15th Jul 2010 01:28 - 16 years ago

on PEACE TO ALL LOOPERS by phantomhim

Great track as always man, definitely needs some good vocals to really put it over the top, keep it up man!!

phantomhim replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

yeah agreed man, got the melodies written just working on the lyrics now. i'll post it up soon. Nice one fam.

ImproveWithError 13th Jul 2010 17:51 - 16 years ago

on needed you by djdaddio

Love the feel of this track, has a lot of great elements to it, one of the better instrumentals I have heard in this genre, keep it up man, this was a great listen!!!

djdaddio replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

thankyou pleased you liked it always appreciated take care D. :0)

ImproveWithError 13th Jul 2010 16:43 - 16 years ago

on PUBLIC ENEMY vocal perfect by phantomhim

Wow no advice needed here, great track, love the flow of the song, great beat, vocals are spot on, really nice job with this, going to add it to my favs. keep it up man this is good stuff.

phantomhim replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks for the review and the fav mate, much appreciated.

Nice one one.

ImproveWithError 11th Jul 2010 22:39 - 16 years ago

on Oh SOS by lasttriedtherapy

Nice job as always, good to see a new track by you seems like it has been forever. This is a really good track, very good lyrics as always. Keep it up, this is really good, of course I wouldn't expect anything less. :)

lasttriedtherapy replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

ohhh =) i'm feeling always honored when i get a review from you! thank you so much

ImproveWithError 9th Jul 2010 16:21 - 16 years ago

on Because of You by N2G

Nice track, I like the dark feel of the track, the vocals really help bring the track to life. Nice job with this, keep it up, this is good stuff.

N2G replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks I appreciate that a lot

ImproveWithError 8th Jul 2010 03:28 - 16 years ago

on Two Time Me Blues by MarkGregory

Vocals are great on this, great lyrics, music is killer as well, everything really came together nicely. Keep it up man, this is good stuff.

MarkGregory replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks much IWE. I am starting to find a groove. The positive feedback helps me to know I seem to be on the right track. Cheers!

ImproveWithError 7th Jul 2010 03:44 - 16 years ago

on The Road Home (update) by AllenV

Killer sounds man, you are very very very talented, I play mostly acoustic and this blows me away, you should play it more often. Adding this to my favs man, you made me smile while listening to this because it was so good, great job, huge fan from me!!!!!

AllenV replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

That means a lot comeing from a fellow guitarist. You know I like your acoustic playing as well and you also know you have to put some heart in it...as you do.People know when your being honest in your music,I like to think you can hear it.I can in your music.I had a couple of comments that it might be better without a drum track and I am so grateful because they were right and those opinions are what we're here for...now if someone thinks I should play it at 140bpm,I must decline.
Thanks for your review,
Allen

ImproveWithError 5th Jul 2010 21:57 - 16 years ago

on working girl by damonmusic2010

Great track man, has a nice sound to it, good voice, keep it up man, was a nice listen.

ImproveWithError 2nd Jul 2010 18:48 - 16 years ago

on Tell Me What You Think Collab Chris Charles by Gordw

love this, going to add it to my favs, this reminds of some of Kings of Leon's older stuff. This is a really great track, I think its one the best I have heard on the site, and believe me I have heard a lot. Nice job on this!!!

Gordw replied Unknown - 2028 years ago

Thanks ever so much man, don't know what to say, I do know the loops I used from this site and Chris's vocals are great though. Thanks for your kind review my friend. Take Care
Gord

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