KnightHeir

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.optimistic - not un-real-istic
.a mystic
.re-al-ist

.we in this - journey to please
.so lets be honest - i - want - my peeps to be free
.the sequel to see - is = to 3...

Great work! I wrote a few bars out of respect but I could just as easily listen to this and just reminisce. Keep em coming 7venth12.

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.trends turning
.trends turning i can see
.been a long time coming
.since im running

.please believe
.from the bad new
.with track shoes need pumice on my feet
.now the light - at the end of the tunnel i can see

.got my purple drank
.and dank weed...

Keep it up!

Aye man, real nice vibe. Thinking about taking it and ripping on it just got so many songs in the process ahh. Anyways dope song bro.

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.track master
.trap faster
.i got crack in sack or rap
.facts sir

.pass that purp
.black gat burst
.red dots on white tees
.that hurts

Keep it up!

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.flex skills
.professional weight lifting
.get bands
.American banking it

.got fans
.standing ovation shit
.shake hands
.CEO of Rapping Inc. ....

Keep it up!

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.keep moving - keep moving
.can't stop - ruin is after me
.no losing - no losing
.showing and proving
.dodging catastrophe

.with hymns that pastors read
.to stop my limbs from atrophy
.motion - that's the key
.stagnation is actually blasphemy.....

Keep it up!

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.i stay focused
.stay blazed smoking
.smoke stacks raging
.hotter than a Cajun

.keep brains open
.just like the days inn
.or 7-11 i gotta thank the heavens

Keep it up!

Ok sharkkitchen, you just ain't gonna allow me to put my pen and pad down huh? Ima have to snatch this and craft some real flames to it. I really like your production style man. Keep up the great work!

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.i got one wish
.just one kiss - from beautiful
.for me to feel like this - unusual
.this is real life biss - true to form

.two passenger ship - thru the storm
.i want you on my arm - wearing tuxedo
.so im selling, the farm - make our love legal
.from just a kiss to this - i must need you........

Great smooth sounding track. Love the main loop and the supporting cast and overall feel.

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.progression im stressing
.there's no question

.cool on the outside
.leave foes guessing

.cool out when I ride
.with the tree's handy

.got to where my fam be
.Amos and Andy

Keep it up!

Nice one. Real smooth.

(rap lyrics )

.back in the day
.on the block, pick up game
.killa shot, entertained
.there is not, anyway

.you could block, dr. jay
.cross over, fade away
.on my moms, i am flames
.i am HOT, im just saying

Nice work man!

(rap lyrics )

.on a higher plane
.migrane from the eye strain
.-now making thoughs real
.for the pain kill

.many thinking "pay bill"
.so they can't chill
.i just pray to the heavens
.for today's meal......

Nice work!

(rap lyrics)

.it's electric
.re-spect
.when i mic check-it
.president e-lect
.of the re-jected

Grea work!

Solid track with a lot of possibilities for vocal. Well mixed and mastered, which is something im working on with my work. Nice job.

Its a rap lyric.

Love it! Let's see what I can do with it.

Wow, nice arrangement. This site really is a good place for musicians man. This joint high octane. Nice work.

Solid instrumental. I like the elements and the flow. Gonna take it and see what I can do with it. Let you know if and or when I get done with it. Keep up the good work.

Good colab. Love the fact that the music is done with instruments. Heartfelt lyrics and a thorough instrumental. Good job.

I like the vibe if this track, nice job!

Really like this song. Message, delivery and instrumental on point. A+

.let loose - let go
.sail far from the know
.like a throw from Bledsoe
.get help from the pros

.close ya mind - get exposed
.by the flows in ya headphones

Nice one!

.wu tang killa bee
.ain't nobody ill as me
.my rap is like trap
.it's like you popped a pill or three

.smoke for the cataracts
.smote with the battle axe
.dope with the rap attack
.dopes - yeah they mad at that

Nice track!