KnightHeir

Looperman classic right here. You did everything right on this one, good work.

Nice flow and beat. Don't know if you know who Necro is but you remind me of him and that's a compliment. Nice work.

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.its survival of the fittest where the ribs touch get it?
.a cigarette for breakfast and for dinner its a Guinness
.the game is Hussein at the top of the food chain
.crews come strapped and the gats spit blue flame rrrattt!...

One word...DOPE!

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.ya pseudo raps
.get ya judo slaps
.now compute those facts
.number crunching thunder cats
.I run it back
.35 and goal
.thunder claps...

Nice beat. Reminds me of El P from Def Juks. Good job.

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.stay on my grind like peppercorn
.money on my mind like the mark
.don't worry bout what set im on
.or my guard send shots like Starks...

Great job man, keep up the great work!

Yeah, 90's east coast rap is the school I come out of. You can hear it in my raps. I try to experiment though. Some of the stuff I will be coming out with in the future will have a new school style bar and flow wise, with old school content. You should check out the Drake and Joe Budden "beef." Perfect example of new school "sneak diss" versus old school direct diss.

Dope ass beat. Love the strong bass and the drums. Melody matches perfectly. Definitely something I could rip to. I noticed you seldom do hip-hop instrumentals. When you do they are dope. Do you pay attention to get he rap game? If so what are your thoughts?

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.starry nights
.brighter than Ferrari lights
.white like Bacardi iced with sprite for the party types

.don't leave the house late night while the monsters waiting
.if you do - follow lights from the constellations...

I like it! Keep it up!

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.fresh
.yes i am dressed to impress
.stepping in suit coat slacks and a vest
.repping im blessed from the sky with success
.threaten my weapon of choice is a tech...

Dope beat homie. Keep it up!

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.cataract smoke
.battle - axe stroke
.thems fighting words dope
.im aiming my scope
.-1 punch k-o to the throat
.plant the flag and
.then stand and deliver you mad?
.mad arrows out the quiver you gasp...

Dope beat homie, keep it up. Liked the drums transitions and the screams.

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.1000 miles behind me
.1000 miles in front
.the journey of 1000 miles - still begins with one
.when the gun goes off - than the race has begun
.i keep a safe pace - in the race - till I've won...

Man this beat is really good. The combination of the smooth melody and the hard hitting drums is a nice contrast. Very nostalgic feel to it. Thanks for the cool beat and the positive message. Peace.

(Something I wrote to this beat)

.went from the bottom to the top
.locked in the spot slinging rock
.not talking bout rock cocaine
.the rock for ya body and ya brain
.rock plus the roll, both mixed
.yes kids this is real as it gets
.wild shit for gorillas in the mist
.nice whiff of the killa that I twist...

Hey Avero, I like this track and the elements and how you put them together. For me as an mc it motivated my creativity. Good job!

Hey man great song. It shows an understanding of the art of music and how to use it to convey a message artistically. I love the duet interplay as well. Good work. One critique I could think of is vocal presence. I also dealt with it at one point and have worked on it since. Obviously this song calls for a more soft voice, but you can still improve the richness and quality of your vocal. Ways that I've improved in this area are things like face stretching and vocal warm-ups before recording. Also, the expression that you have while recording helps also. Like smiling while recording reflect a more rich vocal as it invokes additional emotion that cones through to the listener even if its on a subconscious level. Overall great track. Keep it up. The small details will improve your artistry, it certainly has for me.

(Something I wrote to this beat)

.new climate on the map
.time lapse
.new home for the king
.climax
.when it comes to the bars
.i snap
.little niggas stealing raps
.rhyme hacks

Keep it up!

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Hey Stephskillie, I made a song to this beat it is called "Mad Scientist." You can find it here thanks for the good work you do homie, peace.

(Something I wrote to this beat)

.MIC Tyson
.BAR-mitzvah
.RAP-turous
.all SCRIPT-ure
.FLOW water
.BRIDGE lift up
.Cal-CUT-ta
.HIT India

Dope beat bro.

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.Mac-Gyver
.the bar messiah that rap fire
.like bombs set to blow
.when wired like Al-Qaeda
.a little engineering
.a little bit of chemistry
.will blow
.like my vocal flow with no mimicry ...

Really dope beat bro. Crazy vibe.

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.trap like a mouse with cheese
.packs of the green or the keys
.key islands West Indies
.indie heat - we release
.stress relief - see masseuse
.blaze the best trees to boot
.palms blow - feel the breeze
.after F we the G's aye!...

Interesting transition from the intro into the main beat. In a good way. Very unique melody and nice drums bro good job, had the juices flowing right away. Good job.

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.in the belly of the beast
.ear to the streets
.in the hotel watching telly with the heat
.fetty on the mattress numbers like a math test
.mad stressed fucker cause im ducking the police...

Real dope man. Nice mood to it. It leaves the option to rap a couple different ways. I'll leave the more technical critiques to others. I was really vibin' to it. I just love listening and creating to dope music. Keep it up!

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.comatose kamikaze
.parlee my hobby
.with more hits than Ali
.underground like John Gotti

.catch a body
.like jumping from a 4th story lobby
.laboratory autopsy
.10-4 do you copy?...

Dope beat!

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.yo R-2-D-2
.flow ro-botic
.its OH SO shocking LIKE
.toes in the socket
.spark blown - like the kronoc
.got the BACK - UP power tho
.cowards so funny money
.energizer bunny flow
.back up and beep
.like a Mack Truck ya keep
.tryna act up and see
.get - blow off the BEAT
.i control - alt - delete
.all the foes i can see
.and my flows all is clean
.make you wash - and repeat go!...

Niiiiice beat!

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.yo R-2-D-2
.flow ro-botic
.its OH SO shocking LIKE
.toes in the socket
.spark blown - like the kronoc
.got the BACK - UP power tho
.cowards so funny money
.energizer bunny flow
.back up and beep
.like a Mack Truck ya keep
.tryna act up and see
.get - blow off the BEAT
.i control - alt - delete
.all the foes i can see
.and my flows all is clean
.make you wash - and repeat go!...

Niiiiice beat!

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.love ones - pass away
.they motivate - tracks today
.live on - thru the beat
.new life - so to speak
.going deep - 4 & goal
.hail mary - bless ya soul
.treasure trove - bars glowin'
.4M@ - mudhoen...

I know these tunes aren't made for rap vocals, but I just can't help it, too good to pass on. Sorry for your loss, Great beat man.

(Something I wrote to this beat)

.so stupendous
.flow tremendous
.Jon Cochrane all
.codefendants
.no dependants
.son haters
.cover child
.support payments...

Sick beat dawg!