KnightHeir

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.went from the bottom to the top
.locked in the spot slinging rock
.not talking bout rock cocaine
.the rock for ya body and ya brain
.rock plus the roll, both mixed
.yes kids this is real as it gets
.wild shit for gorillas in the mist
.nice whiff of the killa that I twist...

Hey Avero, I like this track and the elements and how you put them together. For me as an mc it motivated my creativity. Good job!

Hey man great song. It shows an understanding of the art of music and how to use it to convey a message artistically. I love the duet interplay as well. Good work. One critique I could think of is vocal presence. I also dealt with it at one point and have worked on it since. Obviously this song calls for a more soft voice, but you can still improve the richness and quality of your vocal. Ways that I've improved in this area are things like face stretching and vocal warm-ups before recording. Also, the expression that you have while recording helps also. Like smiling while recording reflect a more rich vocal as it invokes additional emotion that cones through to the listener even if its on a subconscious level. Overall great track. Keep it up. The small details will improve your artistry, it certainly has for me.

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.new climate on the map
.time lapse
.new home for the king
.climax
.when it comes to the bars
.i snap
.little niggas stealing raps
.rhyme hacks

Keep it up!

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Hey Stephskillie, I made a song to this beat it is called "Mad Scientist." You can find it here thanks for the good work you do homie, peace.

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.MIC Tyson
.BAR-mitzvah
.RAP-turous
.all SCRIPT-ure
.FLOW water
.BRIDGE lift up
.Cal-CUT-ta
.HIT India

Dope beat bro.

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.Mac-Gyver
.the bar messiah that rap fire
.like bombs set to blow
.when wired like Al-Qaeda
.a little engineering
.a little bit of chemistry
.will blow
.like my vocal flow with no mimicry ...

Really dope beat bro. Crazy vibe.

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.trap like a mouse with cheese
.packs of the green or the keys
.key islands West Indies
.indie heat - we release
.stress relief - see masseuse
.blaze the best trees to boot
.palms blow - feel the breeze
.after F we the G's aye!...

Interesting transition from the intro into the main beat. In a good way. Very unique melody and nice drums bro good job, had the juices flowing right away. Good job.

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.in the belly of the beast
.ear to the streets
.in the hotel watching telly with the heat
.fetty on the mattress numbers like a math test
.mad stressed fucker cause im ducking the police...

Real dope man. Nice mood to it. It leaves the option to rap a couple different ways. I'll leave the more technical critiques to others. I was really vibin' to it. I just love listening and creating to dope music. Keep it up!

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.comatose kamikaze
.parlee my hobby
.with more hits than Ali
.underground like John Gotti

.catch a body
.like jumping from a 4th story lobby
.laboratory autopsy
.10-4 do you copy?...

Dope beat!

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.yo R-2-D-2
.flow ro-botic
.its OH SO shocking LIKE
.toes in the socket
.spark blown - like the kronoc
.got the BACK - UP power tho
.cowards so funny money
.energizer bunny flow
.back up and beep
.like a Mack Truck ya keep
.tryna act up and see
.get - blow off the BEAT
.i control - alt - delete
.all the foes i can see
.and my flows all is clean
.make you wash - and repeat go!...

Niiiiice beat!

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.yo R-2-D-2
.flow ro-botic
.its OH SO shocking LIKE
.toes in the socket
.spark blown - like the kronoc
.got the BACK - UP power tho
.cowards so funny money
.energizer bunny flow
.back up and beep
.like a Mack Truck ya keep
.tryna act up and see
.get - blow off the BEAT
.i control - alt - delete
.all the foes i can see
.and my flows all is clean
.make you wash - and repeat go!...

Niiiiice beat!

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.love ones - pass away
.they motivate - tracks today
.live on - thru the beat
.new life - so to speak
.going deep - 4 & goal
.hail mary - bless ya soul
.treasure trove - bars glowin'
.4M@ - mudhoen...

I know these tunes aren't made for rap vocals, but I just can't help it, too good to pass on. Sorry for your loss, Great beat man.

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.so stupendous
.flow tremendous
.Jon Cochrane all
.codefendants
.no dependants
.son haters
.cover child
.support payments...

Sick beat dawg!

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.in the trop-ical
.blazing trop-ical
.no stop and go - traffic flow
.my optical - seeing lots of dough

.all poss-ible - optimal
.-pina colada - green marijuana
.scene gotta lotta
.chi-cas for Pappa

Kool vibes!

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.on a trap beat
.spit crack heat
.Cadillac Fleetwood
.broke? we good!
.smoke, eat good
.smoke cheeba
.out of Cohiba's
.no seeds bruh
.blow heater's
.flow freezers
.out of pro speakers

.grown man shit
.no damn kids
.cold gold piece
.po-lo fleece...

Sup sharkkitchen? Another dope beat, keep em coming!

Hey fam, love the big, clean sound of this piece. Groovy loop and creative, illusive yet meaningful lyrics. Welcome back.

Truth raps right there, Keep it up
Respect.

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.she's at the top of the list
.a botanist
.softer than a flower petal is
.or cotton tips

.I'm planting seed in the soil
.im gardening
.add a little more right here
.this part is thin...

Keep it up!

Wrote a cold song to this record it on June 12. Let you know when it's done.

Ok, i can freek this. Is there a hook section per say or how should I approach it in your opinion?

Dope song. Nice smooth beat and dope lyrics from both mc's. Its nice to see some other rap acts putting tight music out. Kinda reminds me of Capone and Noriega. Keep it up. Peace.

Aye man, this shit is cold. Motivation!

Sick bro, gonna take it and work on it.

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.laid back in the trap
.just made a stack from a pack
.yeezy's, throwback, fitted hat
.make a months salary while i nap

.-two ballerinas in the cab
.told em put everything on my tab
.take em back to the crib for the stab
.one kissing while the other one getting smashed...

Fictional raps to a real dope beat. Love the chill flow to this beat. Could just go on and on ripping on it. Nice elements and balance. Good job.