This is one of those thieves you do not interrupt better to lose your valuables than to lose your life. Could be a character in a video game or the sound track for a deadly risk. A stage performance for a band would need some great lighting and some background to do it justice, very real.
Angry Heart is a perfect title I can almost hear the words. You lied right from the start tried to break me but your just not that smart now you're gonna have to deal with my angry heart. This is great the lyrics should come pretty naturally just need a voice with a 12 gage.
The first pause I thought was missing a whisper or something, like here I am or don't you see me, something like that. Other than that it was excellent I enjoyed every second of it great work.
on The Thief by TriuneStudios
on Angry Heart by JodyJames
Jody
on Disappearing by AztiraTheSiren