I agree with Modnex. Very uplifting track thats brightened up my day but I also can hear the off key sound in the background, with a little work on the structure of this song it can be such a catchy uplifting song.
Lyrically I can't resist trying to piece some words into this, it's an amazing piece that sounds very different but it works really really well. Nice job!
Nice! Here's something I came up with a few minutes ago, inspired by AnomalyJ :P
100 years no slavery
but were still here and we aint we free
We do our best and still we fall
we have excuses for them all
that moment when we truly see
what we were always meant be
It's only then that we'll be free
And dont end up a catastrophe
I know the world has lied to me
too many times for me to be all
acting like I'm innocent
and don't even know what's good for me
God died for us
so who am I
to run away and live a lie
thats full of sin and misery
He's cryin' out come back to me
I know you're trying hard to be
the person you'd want us to see
but it sure don't come naturally
we all think that it'll be easy
So watch out for that sugar
the devil laces it in our memories
enticing us to go back to sin
But I'll trust in God, He'll answer me
on Running Out of Time by Tevysound2
on Poppe- Wings by Poppe
Lyrically I can't resist trying to piece some words into this, it's an amazing piece that sounds very different but it works really really well. Nice job!
on LOOPERMAN EXCLUSIVE - Need Opinions by BradoSanz
Its a jungle out here
and its hard to swim
when the predators around you
are closing in
(1:08 - 1:12)
But, how can i be free
when I've got all eyes on me
first little crack... not too sure though
100 years no slavery
but were still here and we aint we free
We do our best and still we fall
we have excuses for them all
that moment when we truly see
what we were always meant be
It's only then that we'll be free
And dont end up a catastrophe
I know the world has lied to me
too many times for me to be all
acting like I'm innocent
and don't even know what's good for me
God died for us
so who am I
to run away and live a lie
thats full of sin and misery
He's cryin' out come back to me
I know you're trying hard to be
the person you'd want us to see
but it sure don't come naturally
we all think that it'll be easy
So watch out for that sugar
the devil laces it in our memories
enticing us to go back to sin
But I'll trust in God, He'll answer me
on LOOPERMAN EXCLUSIVE - Need Opinions by BradoSanz
Will be amazing with a nice rapper and singer combo, would be extremely interested in throwing some lyrics over you're way if you like?
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