Hey there :-). I think I can live with everything except the bells. Maybe if you try them at different sections with breaks in between, possibly make them less piercing? Other than that, good job.
I was good until the backgrounds came in, it reveals the vocals and music in different keys. I love the music, perhaps you could post it and seek a collab? The instrumentation is great, the emotion here should be captured better.
Where in the heck was I when this single came out???? Slaps head. This is just so beautifully awesome I don't know what to say. You have done VERY well here my friend.
Would it be ok to download it and upload it to my profile?
So what do you suggest I do to improve the vocals? and oh, I m must say that it has been a great honor to work with your vocals and i think we may need to be in touch more often because I may use them for some commercial purposes. You can always send me an email here: eliaslebogang2@gmail.com to discuss the terms. I'll upload some of the tracks for you.
Very nice choice of piano. You've done well with the atmosphere of the love song :-). Drums were maybe a LITTLE busy in a couple places, but nice job overall.
Thanks allot, Patricia. This is one of my favorite tracks that we've done. Thanks for your great vocals.
Franco ran across another of your vocal tracks, "Only Time Will Tell" and I'm putting the finishing touches on it, so look for it soon. It will feature you in the title.
I was waiting, and listening, and waiting, and waiting...for you to sing :-). Cmon Kenny, sinnnng.
I love the vivacious energy here. I picture a bad boy, leather jacket, cigarette in mouth, a little facial hair growing in. He's waiting in the darkness, patiently, for the action to start. Very nice.
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! This is just so back and forth head bopping. I LOVE IT. Of course Bonnie is always good! This could be a theme song for a tv show. It also has a sort of neosoul feel, I can picture this live. Great job!
Before I knew it I was bouncing back and forth. I can see street dancing of some sort, LOTS of people dancing in the streets. Job well done. I like it.
That bass almost blew me into another universe, I think I have the super woofer setting on...yikes.
Love the laid back vibe of this. Got no where to go, nope, just gonna sit here and do...nothing...LOVE IT! Everything is well done, hats off to this dynamic duo!
Ohhhhhhh, wait, this reminds me of Prince, yep, all Shai Dawn needed to do is that high voice thing he does lol.
Hi Patricia, that is the best compliment one can get when a track reaches out to others with the same emotion that drove the creation of the music. I have found music very comforting especially when you can express your feelings directly through composition. Very much appreciated
Steve
Maybe you could bring my vocals forward a bit, maybe make it a little more clear. My voice is kind of bassy, maybe you could brighten it a bit? Like the other vocals in there, they fit well.
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Would it be ok to download it and upload it to my profile?
Yes it is your song so you can upload it.
Peter
on PATRICIA EDWARDS Move Your Car by Baccambarus by BACCAMBARUS
You have a powerful voice !!
Simply be Inspired
Best Regards.,
B.
P.S.:
Now I'll move my car. Ok..?
Do not be angry.
I understood the message
;-)
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I don't know much about Dubstep, but this sounds kinds Trance-ish, although I don't know much about that genre either lol.
Anyway, good vibes overall, vocals and music are both heard. Two thumbs up!
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Franco ran across another of your vocal tracks, "Only Time Will Tell" and I'm putting the finishing touches on it, so look for it soon. It will feature you in the title.
Cheers,
Scott
on Nightingale Blues by Darkreine
I love the vivacious energy here. I picture a bad boy, leather jacket, cigarette in mouth, a little facial hair growing in. He's waiting in the darkness, patiently, for the action to start. Very nice.
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But your time was well spent with this one!!!!!!
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on Ill with it - feat Nepaul Shatner Bonez PatriciaE by Megapaul
I feel very honored.
Your vocals are outstanding and total professional.
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Love the laid back vibe of this. Got no where to go, nope, just gonna sit here and do...nothing...LOVE IT! Everything is well done, hats off to this dynamic duo!
Ohhhhhhh, wait, this reminds me of Prince, yep, all Shai Dawn needed to do is that high voice thing he does lol.
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-Charlene
on Our Last Goodbye by srbrown7
This is a VERY beautiful piece, very emotional and I hope your music helped to some extent. Sorry for your loss.
Steve
on Everybody On The Dance Floor by deejayfunk
I agree the vocals and music seem a bit disconnected.
Kind of a rough ending, but nice live music!!!
on Summer Breeze by KaolaDanse
And yes, that bass is rather groovy. Good job.