as a fellow amateur producer i would suggest establishing the initial beat at the 2nd measure, this way the listener doesn't get bored with the melody. other than that great song! i like it! -Kenny/HayWire
Wow! Man, great job! This pop track is a great storytelling beat tell you what, I would love to collaborate sometime soon. When I get some time I'll record an Acapella, and with your permission, I would like to use this in a collab. Project,
Keep up this wonderful work man, contact me-- evenkenny42@gmail.com, or https://soundcloud.com/rekd_studios I look forward to working with you.
Great song! But here's my suggestions, lead with the synth, bring the drums in a measure or two. Do that, and it will take care of a need for an intro. Other than these few changes, keep it up man! Check out my soundcloud for inspiration-- https://soundcloud.com/rekd_studios/synth-beat
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Keep up this wonderful work man, contact me-- evenkenny42@gmail.com, or https://soundcloud.com/rekd_studios I look forward to working with you.
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