cool beat, but if i were you I'd give those kicks and the melodies some life homie it's like im listening to the same chord through out the wholeeee beat... but it's well put together. check me out im also a bigginer learn a whoooole lot off of you tube tutorials man, they are great trust me.
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on Know Somethin by Skeezoid
here is my sound cloud link https://soundcloud.com/euphony-instrumentals