loved it, very tight on the production of this, only thougt not criticism is that the 2 guitars panned left and right had nearly the same tone ,maybe just differentiate the 2 by slightly diffeent tones on them. thats all , really dug it!! cheers
this is a great track , if it's a demo to be elaborated on , don't !!! love the simplicity and it works just the way it is. Only criticism is , and I'm clutching at straws here, is that the chorus was less hooky than the verses, the verses make you want to sing along ,but the vocal delivery of the chorus maybe needs a bit more of a hook if anything, well done.
I felt this just needed some contrast , there was no light/dark , loud /soft , quiet/ noisy .... contrast thru this.
I kept waiting for it to jump out at me with a thumping bass and chorus section with the vocals.
I guess it just needed more of a beginning middle end to tell it story , a chorus that jumps out it probably all it needs.
4 minutes of the same thing really , even though you brought in different elements they didn't add to the contrast the song is crying out for.
I did love it , even if my review sounds negative.
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I kept waiting for it to jump out at me with a thumping bass and chorus section with the vocals.
I guess it just needed more of a beginning middle end to tell it story , a chorus that jumps out it probably all it needs.
4 minutes of the same thing really , even though you brought in different elements they didn't add to the contrast the song is crying out for.
I did love it , even if my review sounds negative.