hmm, well, you know, somehow I don't find integrity in this track. by that, I mean it's more like three different songs mixed together. or.. better to say it sounds like a mix which is the preview of an upcoming album, not a single track. so you do find connection between parts, but not enough to make a whole song, maybe it's the transitions you better work on. also, I still think the beginning could be improved. like I said earlier on the previous version, you could probably mix things a little, and not just add beats one by one. dunno, maybe it's just me getting used to this new progressive trance of Naden, but I really suggest you check out his work for hints, that dude certainly knows what he's doing. again, it's nice to see you making progress on this track, keep the spirit alive! ;)
on Second Attempt with a friend by mostaf68
on First Attempt Beta by mostaf68
more of that please! :D